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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. MrDobalina

    MrDobalina Senior Member

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    snap cool fill but wack letters make that shit flow better

    and ahem it ok for a straight letter maybe tilt a few letters so each one touches each other. go paint that shit

    and why do people say "oh do bars, do bars" bars are fuckin gay u dont get anywhere doin bars but generic ass letters like everybody else. id say DONT do bars and do u own shit. might take a bit longer to get somethin u like but once u get it it'll be ur own style and ur own shit. not some cookie cutter bs
     
  2. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    fuckn haven't had time to sketch, been playing with an old name again, i REALLLY NEED TO WORK ON MY R's AND K's lol so don't tell me that, i already know

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  3. devil at sea level

    devil at sea level Member

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    ahem-make your horrizontal bars on the "H" wider so its consistent with the width of the "M's bars, and if your gonna stak the letters under one another, do all of them not just the "a" and "h"
    ilikekicks-nice, maybe just fix the O on the end so it has an opening like the rest of the letters, not just the swirl.
    lucky-make the width of the letters the same and lose the extension on the k(makes it look like an r)
    said-fix the shadowing and make the top of your letters round or squared, not both

    just my opinions


    criteeeeeks?
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  4. Atomik

    Atomik Senior Member

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    nice shit scream out love the steez
    devil try doing more simple bars

    new shit havnt schetched in a while
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  5. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    ilikekicks that looks nothing like all your other shit. it looks like my shit but a wack version of it.
     
  6. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    correct use of bars separates the writers from the toys, style doesent mean much if you dont back it up with proper letter structure, unless your name is APEX
     
  7. freka

    freka Senior Member

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    devil at sea level: good to see you keepin it nice and simple for now although the 3d needs abit of work but practie makes perfect dude

    atomic: realy feelin it man the stars on the bottom one make it look cool aswell keep it up



    outline for a piece im doin tomorow so isnt all shaded because its just to use for painitng

    crits would be apreciated:

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    new stlye ive been workin on not ready to be painted yet needs work:

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  8. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    lines look abit shaky, which makes the whole compilation look stiff, & the piece looks abit squished, dont be shy to stretch it out
     
  9. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    you have so much potential but the letters just look so unproportional .. like the kicker legs on the R n K ... theyre so small compared to the rest of the letters ... everything just looks abit top heavy thats all. keep it up.
     
  10. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Atomik - very nice man, very nice. In the bubble things, i Recommend trying to keep all of those lines straight.
    Freka- on the 2nd one the right end needs to be cleaned up.
    CRITS?? 123klan clouds =]

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  11. Kriede

    Kriede Member

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    from awhile back i just don't think i ever posted it
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  12. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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  13. erase2

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  14. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    What the fuck are you talking about ? ... This is the biggest load of bullshit i think iv ever read on my 2 / 3 years on this Forum.

    Utter bullshit...you obviously know nothing about graffiti so before you make false statements like this on something so important as bars learn some shit .

    How do we expect new people on here to get better at writing when idiots are posting bullshit like that ^.

    Every fucking writer in the world who people consider dope use bars. Everyone.
    Its like saying Revok , Rime , Can Two , Askew , Aroe , Norm etc. etc. didnt get anywhere using bars .... LOL .
     
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  15. numberonestunna

    numberonestunna Senior Member

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    freka - first one's cool. the lines are a little sloppy though. on the second, make the "tabs" on the ends line up on the same horizontal level.
    mass appeal - i really like the second one how its totally symmetrical.
    thrice - get rid of your cloud on top and really pay attention to what colors.
    kriede - sick style but the bridge on the H is messed up and the L looks like a lower case H. keep the letters the same size- towards the end they get too small. very nice tho!!
    rsakens - great style. youve got a really tight coloring technique too. stay up.
    erase2 - GOOD COLORS on the second one, im really feelin it. seperate your letters a bit tho, its kinda tangled up.
     
  16. Mr_Amaziing

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  17. "Bi2aR"

    "Bi2aR" Senior Member

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    really, you think you fuck up during the fills?
     
  18. Mr_Amaziing

    Mr_Amaziing Member

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  19. kroc_oner

    kroc_oner Elite Member

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    mr amazing lose the cros thing part of the c well the right chip at least i dunno practice colors
     
  20. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    He's rigt you need to not connect your letters learn to use bars properly and lose the extensions
    DOn't worry about fills yet.

    erase diggin that style

    Ahem make the legs on your a more inward it looks too big
    Move the m closer in withthe other letters.

    Didn't have enough room for an s
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