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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. WoeInfinite

    WoeInfinite Elite Member

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    thanks scream, yeah that was actually, all freestyled.
    no bars at all really...
    i just fucked around. but i know what you mean, ive been blank forever, i just hate a W.
    but dont wanna change the name..
    idk.
    thanks though.
    Argoe? that looks dope.
     
  2. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    Hahah so true.

    Production update .. im posting it here because its pretty important and i dont think many people visit the thread daily ..

    We have a problem ... i recently sent ALL entrys to SORT because i thought he would be doing the Photoshopping ... and i was fed up with the 1000000 graff pictures on my Comp .. so i deleted the whole folder forgetting all the peices was init ...

    So yeah .. i need everyone to either resend me their peice or do a new one.

    MUNE
    AIMR
    LIBRE
    KASR
    BAZER
    KASPER
    SEYAR
    HOER
    KABRE
    CAER
    DDDDDIM
    IMPALE
    SKETCH
    RABY
    OSHNAP
    NERO
    AKEL
    SHOE 2
    DAWS
    TORN
     
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  3. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    i'm so fuckin tired of my shit getting skipped...
     
  4. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    bump ====]
    this is hot too props for that man felling the G tumor style =] nice concept man


    rasek your painted skills are sick !!!
    your sketches arent that good then i thought
    try to but some more efort in the book and clean up your lines man :)
     
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  5. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    I love it ante, although if anything the first bar on the M (left side) needs to be a bit thinner.
    Do I need to loose that extension?
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  6. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    yes you will be better of without it looks peaty useless
    you can get a striate A down so now look at it and think were you can bend it
    no extensions =]
     
  7. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    yes you will be better of without it looks peaty useless
    you can get a striate A down so now look at it and think were you can bend it
    no extensions =]
     
  8. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    snew- it looks like you know your supposed to do simples. those are simples, but the choppy parts of the letters are unneeded, and the separation of the v bar in the W is unnecessary for you to do at this point and time. your S is pretty simple, but dont over lap the middle part of the s with the tail ends.
    framin- i like both of the throws, but not very much the peice in the middle. it looks like you tried to hard to make it balanced. the flow is what your looking for. don't make the letter on the front and the letter on the back just backwards difference from eachother.
    woe- your steppin into a style you aren't ready for yet bro. i would reccomend changing that w cause i've tried it before and found that its hard to find something to go with it and still have the letters close without it looking bad.
    scream- wow, i really like that. the g tickles me. and the r is nice too. just make your letters coloring a little lighter so i can better see the structure.
    riot- the only letters that have a little flow in them is the R and the A. and they aren't looking very good with the random add ons. stick to the bars that your doing. save the add ons for later.
    keane- your letters are way to bent for my liking. although they look like they have some sort of spinal disease, you manage to make them look good. the coloring amazes me because you take some colors that shouldn't ever be together and make them work. keep up the good work
    gizurd- by far, my favorite thing on this page. very very nice. i've always loved G's and that g is really attractive. i actually like the simplicity of the i, it makes ever thing around it look so much better. and the Z and the R both are very nice. i'm surprised you can find a way to make those letters flow with the g. very nice.

    I GAVE A LARGE ASS AMOUNT OF CRITS. RETURN THE FAVOR.
     
  9. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    ha ha
    i call it the keane spinal disease, style from now on
    thankx for the crit mate
    felling the a on the sketch above e g is sexy too
    what hapent to the m because e you but does bars trough on top it looks a bit like i v i
    are you color it ?
     
  10. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    haha keane spinal disease. lmao.

    yea, i started with the m but built into a different looking style with the last letters... hahaha. i might change the m to make the top part bar off like the E G and A. and yea... i'll probably color it... but i'm shit for coloring... i have to much of a shakey hand to outline.

    thanks for the crit bro.
     
  11. -ShAmEE-

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  12. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    My New Steez with my New name. Crits?
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    Ante- Nice Bars bro. I think it about time you begging to try to color some shit in! :p

    Shame- Not feelin that E at the End bro. I think the Horizontal Bar is Too Skinny and is to sperate from the rest of the Pecice.
     
  13. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    Seperate the E from the N mannnn .. and how can you draw so messilly ? ... i must use atleast 3 peices of paper for every clean sketch.

    This says RAHER ... get it ? .. Aher with a R ... Raher ? ... yeah.

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    Yeah really.
    It isnt finished ... and i dont know whether TO finish it ?.

    Should i ? . Shouldnt i ?
    If i finish it i MIGHT even KULAR it rlyy Eur00.
     
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  14. pathos

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  15. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    (sos) viruz - u should try cleanin it up and work on ur coloring skills also try to spend more time doing the outline ur lines are pretty shakey
    Shamee - cant read it dude sry. unless it says mae... then i guess thats a pretty funky style
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    crits?
     
  16. mekosbc

    mekosbc Senior Member

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    virus the e's midde bar lookz mad shaky...
     
  17. Stim

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  18. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    first day back to school sketch, gonna start fuckin with this style a lil more. crits on letters would be appreciated

    mint- the m looks too round imo, like the rest of the letters are more blocky
    tear- work on your lines and if you use the bar going in front of the e and a, make it go in front of the r too
    ante- throw a drop shadow on that ish, the letters are niiice
     
  19. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    dude that is such a dope concept, i just dont like all the negative space behind the H, i think it would look dope if you had a little something around it like all that splatter kinda stuff you usually have around or behind your pieces. if you know what i mean haha, i fail at explaining + describing
     
  20. Mass Appeal

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