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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  2. Snew

    Snew Senior Member

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    Yarbles- I dig the simp.. just try to keep all the letters proportionate, expecially the A and the S or make the others bigger..
    Framin- Fresh two page spread.. similar to yesterday, but im diggin the fill better today.
    Bizare- I dig the first karac, the second one needs some work.. its probly best you put it to rest with the new one.
    Skeetz- definately stick to simps dude.. the style will come later..
    whahappen- its an alright throwie.. i mean it seems to flow well except the S throws it all off..

    this is from an exchange a while back.. dont mind my handstyles.. i have NO skills...

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  3. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    hell yeah! whats up guy! where you been? you gonna post some more shit? i wanna see how much you progressed!
     
  4. Sone10

    Sone10 New Member

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    can someone just give me a few ideas on wat to fix up, i think i stuffed up my S
     
  5. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    i got caught like middle of last school year and havent been sketching much at all since then so i havent really progressed at all haha
    probably gotten worse
    i think i might just start sketching a little, posting my throws and whatever, checking out the toy thread
    and by the way, your pieces are crazy
    especially that ballpoint pen one against some dude, i cant remember
     
  6. smikoer

    smikoer Senior Member

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    Yarbles; im gonna go against the grain.. make the rest more top heavy like the A.. but as you already know.. proportions.
    Snew: nice simp, i would have fixed that M up to fill the whitespace up a bit more. seems unbalanced?

    First time posting anything more than a tag on teh internets:
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  7. fonone

    fonone Senior Member

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    eh koer make the middle bar of your E longer, it will look better. not really liking the R either but overall it's different which is good. sick of seeing the same old shit. reminds me of some of the old school perth shit

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  8. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    Irek- i like that style, i dont think the curl on the I flows tho.
    Koer- i dont think you should connec all the bars together.
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    Ive been colouring in photoshop because its easier.
     
  9. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    It may be easier to color in photoshop, by the way it looks cool as hell, but I recommend practicing with markers, it may ruin it but gotta get better at it someway.
     
  10. fonone

    fonone Senior Member

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    so he can be the ultimate king of sketching?
     
  11. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    Exactly a sketch means nothing, ive never painted with a full colour sketch theres no point its only gonna get covered in dirt and paint, i used to colour sketch but its a waste of time, its easier to fill with paint than it is with markers.
     
  12. blastblast

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    ai54.photobucket.com_albums_g96_kegpistol_Photo606.jpg
    ignore the purple shit
    other than that the shading look ok?
     
  13. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    You need to go very SIMPLE, and the shading is bad, the 3D is messed up. Those lines to need to stay parallel to each other.

    Edit: clean your hands, they're dirty.
     
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  14. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    give crits to recieve young padowan.
     
  15. blastblast

    blastblast Member

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    thanks and i'll wash behind my ears also!
     
  16. erase2

    erase2 Member

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    koer - what kind of paper is that, lol
    irek - yeah, no curl on the I and make the E and the K more simpler to better fit the other letters
    aimr - nice letters
    blast - def do simples
    sone - the S throws off the flow i think you should make it more vertical
    snew - nice simple, i think an uppercase E would have worked better though
    whahappen - nice throw
    skeetz - nice style, i lise the first better than the second
    yarbles - very sick, yeah the S is a little fatter than the rest
    seyar - i think if you incorporated the style that you did for the E and A into the other letters it would have come out better
    bizar - sick character
    romo - nice coloring, im not a big fan of the symmetry though

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    EDIT: better picture
     
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  17. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    erase-that is so sick man, only crit I can give ya is fill the negative space in between the letters, maybe thicken that forcefield, can't see it to well.

    Crits so far?
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  18. The Chronic

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  19. Spraycan Stories

    Spraycan Stories Senior Member

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    Thrice- Why is the H so straight make it flow with the A
     
  20. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Can I make it flow, without curving the right bar exactly the same?? I really don't want to make every letter the same setup, with right bended bars.