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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. PROJECT LINK

    PROJECT LINK Senior Member

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    ya thats what every 1 sais im workin on it lol thanks tho man... ur pretty good at throwie jus work on the color selection
     
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  2. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    i got clout this is a dope strait simple bomb XD
    like all the letters apart from the s its good but doesent fit to getter with the rest looks like the round elements are missing in there all of the other ones has them =/
    not sure about the background kinda random
     
  3. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    i'm not flatttering my self, your fucking dumb man. there was no cocky-ness to the whole thing. then do yo e's in a fucking capital man. hahahahaha. and there is really no writing in the bs world, only drawing so i only draw. hahahaha. i'm drunk so don't get too offenddded.
     
  4. jersOneTIC

    jersOneTIC Senior Member

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  5. PROJECT LINK

    PROJECT LINK Senior Member

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    jers- i think it flows pretty nice bro, jus add some color man
     
  6. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    jers - that has a lot of potential, if you loose all the extensions that would look so sick, also your 3d is a little off but its not bad

    raby - thats sick, not too many cracks either, i allllllways over do the cracks and kill the piece. i think that sketch would look more solid with capital letters, theres a lot of dead space with the lower case one, but that y is damn sexy haha

    keane - that style is becoming prety solid man, im begining to realy like your crazy ass E's

    easer - i thought those e's were realy weak C's at first, i think it would help if there was a little something in it to define the letter a little better, just my opinion
     
  7. Czar One

    Czar One Senior Member

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  8. Bossman-

    Bossman- Senior Member

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    that blockbuster is ballin. love the busted blocks in the blockbuster.

    rsakens-. well theres nothing to ssay.that shit is more stylin than some stuff seen in the big boy thread(not much of it but even pros have their off days)

    andrea-. i like it. alot. some work can be done to keep it more... clean. the r and the d seem to be gettin it on or something. a little space is good.
     
  9. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Yeah I know what you mean, I tried to make a different S with the rounded aspect but it just wasnt workin out for me.
    As for the color/background, those were the only colors I had. Just spare cans. I was gonna wait till I had better colors, but...I didnt. :)
    Preciate the crits everyone.
     
  10. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Czar- I like you exstentions. I especially like that "r" But I'm not feeling the second sketch. Looks a lil Sloppy. And not really Feeling the "E" in the second one. I'd say use different colors to make your stuff pop.
    BUT you have a sweet handy.
     
  11. UnConscious

    UnConscious Senior Member

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  12. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    unconscious- work more on your simples, the top things pretty bad.
    czar-not really feeling that stuff. i like your other stuff better.
    jers- pretty dope, just experiment with your R a little. Fuck with the kicker or something.
    easer- i like your other style better. not a fan of the lowercase e and r.
     
  13. BEAS one

    BEAS one Member

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    im new to the sight but not new to graff
    crits on this outline?


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  14. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    bored, full page of quick pen/marker freestyles haha
    full of poor structure
    but my fish oneliner is prety badass in my opinion
    ai91.photobucket.com_albums_k301_Inhumation_Photo353.jpg
     
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  15. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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  16. Dying to live

    Dying to live Senior Member

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    funky styles bro


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    shit webcam pic sister stole my cam .... you get the idea tho
     
  17. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    oh shit,already done?
    i like it,the o looks a bit too small but i still like it ty

    hoer,scream-tight tight tight
     
  18. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    Yeah my O's are poo so i did a little space filla one.
     
  19. BEAS one

    BEAS one Member

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  20. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    beas- dont bump your shit on the same page. but anyway its too choppy. just make em regular capitals like the ones on your keyboard. use curves as well as straight bars. the a is a little too fat also.

    aimr- that torn is dope!

    akelz- im lovin that style. just needs some highlights.