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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. 00-made-00

    00-made-00 Elite Member

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    Props to everyone on this page for putting in effort, this threads getting good.
     
  2. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Aimr-nice and clean
    infoe-get rid of the round ends on the X.
    South pole-good stuff man, that R is so sick, keep it like that.
    Smooth-great stuff man, im jealous
    Rsake-where is my xchange? just kidding but seriously i'd like one, sick as always.
    Mabe-i love it, post more
    task- great simples keep with it
    evasion-holy bajesus that is nice.

    Crits aside from my shitty bar proportions and kerning(letter spacing) Just wanna know if my bar bends make sense and flow well together. It was a quick sketch.
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  3. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    ai33.tinypic.com_2j2b9td.gif
    Got really bored in science

    Ahem everything looks too forced make it flow and make everything looks smoother and push the letters in closer

    smooth dope

    task not feelin that k
     
  4. acereborn

    acereborn Elite Member

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    No offense, but haven't you posted that entire sketch letter by letter for the last week?
     
  5. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    im really really impressed with what ive been seeing lately.
    daps to
    -sixer
    -akels
    -hoer
    -MA!BE
    -keane

    aimr, tight letters, but fuck the background. add a 3D or a shadow, it'd look fresh as fuck.

    ahem, keep workin on the flow. that bend in the M kills the flow somethin heavy. have the spines of your letters slant the same slope in the same direction. it'll help, bring the letters closer, add a quick 3D. make your M less wider, the same width as the rest of the letters. try sketching smaller, i bet the results would be more beneficial.
     
  6. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    bump cause i really like the hoer :/

    I GOT DAPS FIRST! :p
     
  7. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    acerborn-no, that was a quick 10 min sketch for crit on bending, this is what you're referring to.
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  8. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    man just stick with what your doing in that last sketch right there.....and work on your 3d its off in alot of places
     
  9. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    just some quick shit
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    excuse the double post
     
  10. disclaim

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    o's lookin good.
    try rotating the image if u can
     
  11. disclaim

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  12. Dying to live

    Dying to live Senior Member

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  13. LikeRainButNot

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    work on keeping ur 3d consistent for every letter. try using a focus point, that helps a lot.
     
  14. NEZ89

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    ahem- make the bottom middle of the M less pointed
    akel- the letters are dope but i don't like the fill, too dull for me i guess
    i like nice bright vibrant colors

    not finished, gonna remove some stuff and add color
    and i'm a bit skeptical with the R, not sure what to change on it

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  15. NEZ89

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    sorry for the size
     
  16. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    liking the blocks hin...sep the kink in the i on the green one :l
    akel's fresh.
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  17. rsakens

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  18. garbage down tha way

    garbage down tha way Elite Member

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    that hoer you did is dope homey!

    hint- i like the western one.

    farik - lookin dope so far.

    akel- that is my favorite piece from you. that shits on another level.
     
  19. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    my man hoer
    too fucking dope!!

    and anyone that misses me im in college now so i should be posting alot more :0D
     
  20. MA!BE

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    The R kinda messes up the flow to your piece try not to cover it up so much with your A cause i cant tell if its an R or B other than that good work