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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
dope! haha that was a fast exchange.
jet- i like all of em especially the fill on the last one its fresh
hail- good simp but the h is shifted too far up
garbage- the hin is dope but the T isnt that great...
two simps i did today.crits?
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hail - Good shit. I wanna see it painted.
tint - Good but fix the top of the T.
rake - The 2nd one is good just make it a little less sloppy and make the horizontal lines thicker.
Shit, mines hella sloppy too.
My first attempt at using bars.
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and i get free wings.
yalls suck haha, no but really.
I'm way out of practice. Haven't sketched in a few months...
Didn't erase all my pencil, my G is out of alignment. Anything else?
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Couldn't get my handie to flow right today for some reason, so I stopped before I had more scratched out crap.
I said it in another thread already.
That is awful. Hit up blocks and bubbles.
Instead of using the bars the way you did there, make keyboard letters out of them.
mega <--- Exactly like that. Extensions and all.
Take the time to carefully construct each letter out of blocks, with a little more time/experience bending will come more naturally.
Work on your bar sizes, try to keep all of your thin bars about the same width, same goes for your big bars..
Keep the letters more or less uniform in size left to right.
Looking good though.
Try keeping you bars an even width
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please...fix that handstyle, more than anything
do NOT make the J, part of ur A, its...shiesty
please and thank u
mega, hybrid, and sense - practice ur simps and bars. a lot.
bigel - tight shit. love ur work.
the character has some good destial
been trying to get some nice simps out to paint at this youth thing with some other writers
pimp my ride on the bottom
my personal favourite
inspired by vagrants stacked idea
dont like the dead space at the bottom of the p
jaef- looks like youre using bars, dont worry about filling now, letters arent too bad flatten the ends a bit and re work the e so that the top horizontal bar isnt so long and remove that vertical add on. its an ok simple just do that over and over again and experiment and your 3d is off in some places
geski- i like what you've got going, the i is very original, dont try too hard to get the letters to flow because you butchered that k trying to make the letters take the same form, either think of something else for the k, completely adandon that style or switch it for another letter, maybe a c
sense- you seem like you wouldnt take in what the crits were but i'll try, simples, simples, simples, bars, bars, bars, new to graff thread, new to graff thread, new to graff thread if you dont do any of this then you're a lost cause
bigel - always loved your stuff, freshest characs
mega- good that youre starting to use bars but youre at the wrong end, start with MEGA and then do it over and over again until you have a perfect simple and then start bending them, filling is not necessary right now
rake- k's horrible on the first one, dont fill them for now especially with those felt tips that youre using, makes it look hella sloppy, letters are mostly ok on second one, just make the k overlap the e, i always do mine in pencil and dont fill til a few days later because i'll go back to it and realise something could be made better so i'll correct that, until you got solid simples down dont worry about filling, vanishing point is a bit off in some places as well
hint- work on different letters than your own, i quite like your style but the o, e and r in both the throwie and the piece could be a lot better, the piece is ok but not up to your normal standard that i see from you, i liked your throwie style as well, it seems really sloppy their and your e is quite bad, also i think the o's too small in the piece and alot more could have been done with it
second ones dope dude guy^, just make the bar for the loop of the P the same width as the resssst. keep it up. get some flicks when you've painte dit aswell
this shit is fucking wack. fuck you. you suck.
either learn simple letters and proper use of bars or get the fuck outta here. that shit is wack. i dont care if you think it's "dope" and i dont care if you think it's "original"
im tired of seeing your wack shit, it wouldnt be as bad if you didnt think it was good. but the fact youve got an attitude about it makes it even worse.
thank you, goodbye.
and fonone, drapht is ill. that is all.
oh fucking what. obese recordsssdsds. where you from jetpack???
canada. good hip hop has no boundries.
i'll have a sketch up in a bit. it's been a minute since ive posted a flick.
letsgobombing - real good simps. keep it up.
jet - clean as always. like the colors.
new page bumpo
if you're gonna say about crits then look at the original post
hint- dont like the heart/ spade at the bottom of the i and i would say to connect all those bits where its broke off like on the n, its on the h and t as well but that doesnt look too bad, i like the colour scheme but what are those black chunks below the 3d? definitely get rid of them
hail- i like that style, keep working with it, stick to the simples and your 3d is off in some places and your missing drop shadow on the right bit of the top bar if the i
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