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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Kriede

    Kriede Member

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    hey he can write whatever the hell he wants. so you may shut your damn mouth. just doin him a favor and NOW i see it's an old sketch.

    i'm not a BS newbe like you may think.
     
  2. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    then what you doing in the toy section?^^
     
  3. Kriede

    Kriede Member

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    never said i wasn't a toy.
     
  4. NoCanControl

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  5. Jet

    Jet Elite Member

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    if you're going to do that little chip in the crossbar if the A, you should do it in the crossbar of the H and the middle bar of the E also.
     
  6. NO_1

    NO_1 Senior Member

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    ai8.photobucket.com_albums_a2_fender336_illestpeiceivedonethusfar.jpg
    contres

    illest thing ive produced

    commnets?
     
  7. -sense-

    -sense- Senior Member

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    whahappn-that link froze my shit for a second and i cant even tell.
    so
    simples simples bars bars
    alright alright
    ai38.tinypic.com_2exsm8o.gif
    the last se could use some scoochin twards the center.
    contres that pretty sweet.try to open the o a little bit more.
     
  8. "Bi2aR"

    "Bi2aR" Senior Member

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    ^don't like it
    bump no crits:(
     
  9. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    sense, thats A LOT better than what i've seen from you. but it still sucks.

    make all your letters like your N, your N is good. bar porportions are done properly
     
  10. Worms

    Worms Guest

    bezar is a sick name i used to write besar i posted shit a long time ago on a diff acount but lost my pasword but then i found it it means kiss in spanish so i was like that homo
     
  11. -sense-

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  12. TheMuffinMan

    TheMuffinMan Senior Member

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    ok peeps laugh it up, been lurking the forums a while, posted for a while, then been browsin the forums with no posting, im a huge TOY, just started up, first 2 sketches, both during 3rd period on different days. flix are from my phone.
    [Broken External Image]:http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/4205/nonameqp5.jpg
    and
    [Broken External Image]:http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/5356/noname1cy6.jpg

    -sense- i feel that the N is plain compared to the rest of it, besides that its straight, wouldn't want that shit around any balloons at my party though :p

    NO1- it looks crazy only thing is its just a bit too busy for me, but thats just me
    thrice- i think it looks good, only 2 things is that 1 i agree with jet, maybe try the little line on the crossbars for your other letters as well, and 2, the curve on the H i think it would look better if it was just straight

    resp- im not too fond of this one, cant really put my finger on it but just not feeling it.
     
  13. Mr yarbles

    Mr yarbles Elite Member

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    Why you gotta be a dick about everything dude?
    if someone told me to go simple I wouldn't complain I'd go simple
    These guys are trying to help you

    Muffin use bars and go simple
    Also don't ever write king
    I made that same mistake when I started out
    Bad idea.
     
  14. TheMuffinMan

    TheMuffinMan Senior Member

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    oh, i haven't decided on a name yet, just did king cuz we were talkin bout Europe and the whole revolution in history class and i just started writing, and ok, ill do bars
     
  15. -sense-

    -sense- Senior Member

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    yarbsles i was laughin at worms story, im taking the advice i went somehwhat simple and still did my thing. if you take my puting hah as being a dick well chill out. sometimes i just browsing so ill put what i feel.
    i welcome the critisism and enjoy hearing what everyone to say, so mush respect.

    muffin i know what your saying but hey gotta keep it simple.
    i think the bottom shadow on the g could be scaled a lil closer just to keep the perspet
     
  16. klic

    klic Elite Member

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    never got any crits for this

    muffinman that wasnt even that bad, id just lose the crown on the first sketch
     
  17. amberTrichome

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    Muffin the tek isn't great but I like the king...
    Bizar like it maybe fix the R up a bit?
    Sense just cuz all your extensions are going the same way doesn't make it good lol but seriously dude you needa work on ur bars shits all fuckin crooked looking just keep doing simples like real simples not that crap so maybe you can understand what
    Contres looks sick color it in!
     
  18. whahappen?

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  19. sky_one

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  20. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    over lapped to much on the E. letter look like they comin along tho keep at it.

    View attachment 402095

    sketch battle outline.