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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Czar One

    Czar One Senior Member

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  2. klic

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  3. <J-one>

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    just a couple of doodles.
    first one says BASR, but i changed my name so the other three are GASR

    sorry if they're big
    ai61.photobucket.com_albums_h45_stove_top_BASR.jpg

    ai61.photobucket.com_albums_h45_stove_top_GASR1.jpg

    ai61.photobucket.com_albums_h45_stove_top_GASR.jpg

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  4. VoyR

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    The E does kinda remind me of a rhinoceros... Ty for the crits I want something on the tip of the E but ill work on it and get back with everybody. your right klic, it reminds me of a jersey 0. Ty for the critz. :p

    Czar I'm toy as hell but I'm digging those 1 liners ( i think thats what they are) either way they look sick!

    That Votes would be better if you straightened the V out. I'd straighten out the bar thats closer to the O and switch the O around so the slants on the other side. Then u can do the other side of the V at an angle... That V kinda looks like an X or maybe a fucked up U.

    :p but keep in mind all of these are suggestions from a toy. Ty for the critz guys :D glad to see i finally got the hang of the bars shit (to a point).
     
  5. SiC_one

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    aa695.ac_images.myspacecdn.com_images01_97_l_0dbad2b8eb9814d73a294f89daf05586.png
    Ran out of green on the D
     
  6. sky_one

    sky_one Senior Member

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    sex without condoms -dope style you got and nice weed XD
    herbn-love does characters dope
    cerex-fix you E the rest is cool put that on the wall ;)
    fube.dope style
    stoan-nice keep working
    rsakens-DOPE!!!
    give-me some crits please i need lol
    sorry about the shit image
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  7. cerex89

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  8. VoyR

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    Man no offense but I'd go back and re-color it in and do it right. Its not a hot spot fill its a black book sketch... No body's going to arrest you for taking more then 10 seconds to color it in.
     
  9. mmmburgers

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    dont ever EVER EVER use arrows ever again
    shits mad gay

    BUT the sketch is good, but get rid of those arrows!
     
  10. SiC_one

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  11. VoyR

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    Critz, I Got tired of having the letters from above so simple and I didn't like all the negative space they had. So when I put them together I made them a bit more complex. Hope i didn't over do it. Also went with a capitol E I think it keeps the piece a bit more even. Let me know.

    Thanks in Advanced.
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  12. Thrice

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    Voyr-top parts of the V need to be fixed, especially the right top bar.
     
  13. kroc_oner

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    voyer tht looks nicejust work on the v
    jone your styles nice i like how it looks
    amber thts sick nice fill and i just like how it looks
    void u should try bendingg your bars u been doing simples for a while doesnt look bad tho
    haze nice full and 3d looks good
    and jens nice throws
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  14. Czar One

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  15. kroc_oner

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    bttm page bump
     
  16. Czar One

    Czar One Senior Member

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    I like that K, but the E and Z are hurting.
     
  17. kroc_oner

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    hmm lol idk i have another sketch ill flick and post i dont really mind since ive improved alot since the shit iused to do ill work on it tho
    and czar nice one lines
     
  18. Thrice

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    Czar-looking good, just clean up the lines.
    Kez-great style and flow, but Some of the lines seem off, and not parallel to the other line of the bar.
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    Crits please
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  19. VoyR

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    Kroc Idk why but I'm just not diggin those letters. I think its because they seem so generic. (just my opinion) Thrice is right, Work on keeping your lines parallel you have a lot of mistakes in that. If you have to lightly sketch the line through the empty space that is what ever your covering and erase it later, go for it.


    Czar thats a sick ass 1 liner. Soon as i get my basics down I'm going to work on those because there so sick! I'm loving that shit!

    Thrice thats looking good keep up the good work! (I'd look at the M for some reason its sticking out to me to having something wrong with it but i can't quite put my finger on it.)


    ai532.photobucket.com_albums_ee326_david_voyer123_voyerbar.jpg

    The bar on the V is supposed to go straight up and then kink sideways. (similar to the Y) but i messed it up when i was trying to get an O that would follow the style. More critz pls :p same pic as above. Thanks for the advice I'll work on it.

    Peace out guys
     
  20. kroc_oner

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