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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
sense your bars and letters are all different sizes, work on making it all equal. The thickness and length is different in all your letters especially the two e's
good job man, keep it up. now your getting the idea! just do what SIC said with your bars, keep them consistant.
Feedback is greatly appreciated
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take off all the extra bars and extensions on your letters for now. focus on the basic bars and then start bending them and adding on extra bars and junk
kez-shits lookin pretty good man. nice call on keepin it simple to start.
nastonE- alot of strangely placed extension. try to stick with straighter lines and keeping your letters level and proportioned.
rae- your style is bringin some serious sickness...but i have seen it before. try to revolutionize the game once your comfortable.
atlok- you shit is fuckin tight. can you paint as well as you draw
fixed it up a bit, filled in the dropshadow and added some bubbles.
rae that looks alot cleaner now..
here's a little somethin. tell me what ya think
oh no a new atlock
just wen he deaded the pointlees addons
obey is the best
naston, looks real nice
maby its just my toy eye but the flow of the piece is left heavy (lots goin on on the left with a void on the right)
Plus in the letters there's a lot of lines. I dont know if you ment to do this, if you did its awesome, but i would try erasing the lines inside the letters
o yea and sex, nice weed
holy shit thats nice
I thought the same thing.
yes sex, weed r good
and sweet sketch throne
id color it and put it back up for crits
i love what you did on the k, the top left stick where the arrow looks like its behind the letter. I like the D too, with the underpass arrow. The onlything that i dont like about it is the T and E blend and are a little confusing, its probly just the extra arrows underneth. Im sure some color could clear things up. Good job
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