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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. I Hold The Throne

    I Hold The Throne Member

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    Well the d is actually an O. I guess u can say it looks like a d but this is really my first time doing a sketch that is like this. And im glad u like it too. I had a hard ass time wit the arrows too. Trying to place them right
     
  2. ClaimRSM

    ClaimRSM Member

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    View attachment 403235

    I've been constantly ignoring practicing my simples. ignoring practicing graff in general.

    little question I've tried making letters and they are horrible. I gotta keep doing simples right? and more simps i do more i understand my name's letter structure and flow then i progress no? because it seems like i'm going no where

    Framing it- damn those are all sick dude.
    I like the 1 and 2nd one the most good colors
     
  3. -sense-

    -sense- Senior Member

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    claim you know what you gotta do so do it.just work on it.that what its all aboot.

    using a focal point
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    i wasnt too sure on the back bars shadow so i decided to bring it up
    ai36.tinypic.com_5khjrl.gif improvement?
     
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  4. Skies

    Skies Member

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    i know toys shouldn't crit toys, but all i'm saying is Sense, good simples (Y)

    I'll post some of my stuff later.
     
  5. Scratch

    Scratch Senior Member

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    sense and casm- nice to see kids doing simples. keep it up. straight letters are the way to be.

    framin it- i like your style. some ill shit you got there.

    sky one- pretty good, just lose pointless add ons, like the arrow and extra shit on the e. or the underline.

    i hold the throne- sorry dude, but youre trying to do a style thats way too complex for what you can do. stick with the other kids and do simples. its the only way to progress.

    Alright, now for some of my new shit =] Did this in my friend SIT's book the other day. Crits are greatly welcome.

    chyeah.
    ai74.photobucket.com_albums_i277_ethanablouin_0829081435.jpg
     
  6. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    thats not even fair lol
    that shit is so fucking boss i dont even know where to start
    sense thats a good idea to do one with block letters using a focal point, good idea

    casm, take the block form and bend the blocks. Try and retain the shape of the letter while making it look nice. when you make the letter, think abut the things you like about the letter and the thing you dislike. carry these things to your next drawing and improve your style. thats the most effective way to improve your graffiti, critique your work and improve your next one
     
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  7. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    /facepalm
    some of you really need to get the concept of BARS through your damn fat heads

    sketch, the "ORA" part is weak as fuck but its a new sketch so ill post it anyways
    ai91.photobucket.com_albums_k301_Inhumation_Photo365.jpg
     
  8. -sense-

    -sense- Senior Member

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  9. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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  10. cerex89

    cerex89 Senior Member

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  11. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    nice jens, i like the bubbles but the letters are still prety basic. its just the style though
     
  12. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    battle
    real gangsta shit vs exitus
    due whenever exitus is done.
    word is "ass"

    posts deleted.
    that is all... now wheres my beervessa.
     
  13. Skies

    Skies Member

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    ai38.tinypic.com_dc6bkh.gif

    ye' sucky, i know.
    crits?
     
  14. Skies

    Skies Member

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    ai37.tinypic.com_i5ojna.gif

    i tried. lol
    crits...
     
  15. Skies

    Skies Member

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    just a pencil outline,
    and the picture wasn't meant to be that big.
     
  16. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    this would be perfect if you took off the last piece after thae last S and then erased the lines in the top of both your S's
     
  17. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    if the E was a little skinner to match the other letters it would be fire
     
  18. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    fina;;y sat my ass down and did a quicky for raby
     
  19. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    I kinda like the things in the s's, if you shade it it could turn out realy cool. One thing i dont like is that its not a very realistic piece to actual throw up. the angle would be realy hard to paint unless your like mj or something. other than that its a real nice style
     
  20. Scratch

    Scratch Senior Member

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    bump, crits please.