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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Nirvous2000

    Nirvous2000 Member

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    I'm pretty new to graff, heres a sketch I did. just looking for some crits thanks. and yes i need to clean up the first P and the E

    ai126.photobucket.com_albums_p111_AscheZuAsche_album_PEptoburner.jpg

    Tester- I'm feeling those letter, but they could be cleaned up hellla, the first T's a litle weird, and the scribbles coming out of the E are weird, I would do a different 3D too.
    Nooze- I like that, those O's are prettty sick. but the N and the E need cleaning up.
     
  2. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    i think that the k is hard to read and doesnt relay fit in. (on the top its level with the other letters and on the bottom its way beneath
     
  3. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    theres not even a sketch of a K on this page dude
     
  4. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    is the middle letter a p or a k? looks a lot like a k
     
  5. Nirvous2000

    Nirvous2000 Member

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    how the fuck is that a K? no hate but like i looked at it every which way to see how its a K. and i dont see it. but yeah, i;m gunna clean those letters up soon.
     
  6. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    The second P almost looks like a K...
    It reads Pepto people.
     
  7. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    The second P almost looks like a K...
    It reads Pepto people.
     
  8. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    keane ma main u no toy
     
  9. testr

    testr Member

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  10. cerex89

    cerex89 Senior Member

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  11. Sadistic.Child

    Sadistic.Child Elite Member

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    Weak crew name ^

    weak sketchwa of mine to sum it up :)

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    marker freestyle ^

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    bored ^

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    plain piece of shit ^

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    old ^
     
  12. IlikePie

    IlikePie Elite Member

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    Faggot ass toy. Stealing people's fanbase and whatnot.
     
  13. Sadistic.Child

    Sadistic.Child Elite Member

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    bahaha, pie you know i love you
     
  14. DonaldFour

    DonaldFour Member

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    bump for crits
     
  15. Xored

    Xored Member

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    DonaldFour - Your E and G are really fucked up. Fix them and re-sketch :)
     
  16. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    did u use pencils? use markers dood
    your highlighting is realy nice so is your color but you do need to work on your letters
     
  17. REKD_ONE

    REKD_ONE New Member

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    new to this site figured id get some feedback from here.
    heres my latest, crits and advice would be great
    yea my handstyle sucks lol
    safe
     

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  18. DonaldFour

    DonaldFour Member

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    those are markers. the highlights are in white prisma colored pencil

    and can i ask how i needa work on my letters bad? it's a simple, -.-' just sayin lol
     
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  19. major"LEAG"

    major"LEAG" Member

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    Hit me with the crits...
     
  20. ErrorOner...

    ErrorOner... Elite Member

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    Throw up your crits... tell it like it is
     

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