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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    excitus, - do simples dude. copy the letters off your keyboard for a while, read the new to graff thread. you have no structure, no flow, no feel for the letters

    ahem - i dont like any of your bends personally, i think it would look a lot better with straight bars, but it seems like your starting to get a better feel for your letters. on another note all of your middle bars seem to be smaller than the main bars especially on the M, try to keep all your bars the same width even if they arent a major part of the letter for now. it also miight help if all the horizontal bars were in line with each other, because right now the A bar is lower than the H bar but the H bar is fairly even with the middle E bar.

    void - good job on the simple, i cant tell if you used bars or not but regardless thats a solid start



    TO ANY TOYS WHO HAVE NOT YET READ THE NEW TO GRAFF THREAD: READ THE NEW TO GRAFF THREAD
     
  2. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    not all graff is meant to look beautiful, the choice of colours was intentional and turned out as i had wanted it to, the quality of the picture is the problem.
     
  3. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    ok, i finished the last one though

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    Ill do simples now
     
  4. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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  5. Scream Out

    Scream Out Senior Member

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    use some damn bars. and do that about 100000000000 more times untill you can do it clean, keep all your bars the same width, your S is lacking, if you have to, use straight bars (like a backwards Z)

    sketch pages of simples, its the only way you will ever improve, dont post anymore sketches untill you have a nice solid simple you can be proud of. once you get that down then you can begin to start bending bars and developing some kind of a style. this is not going to happen in a day, nor a week, it will take months to years of dedication to get anywhere. if your not in it for the long run, get out now.
     
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  6. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    dont shadow or like overlap or anything
     
  7. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    you already know the deal.
     
  8. InkDrips907

    InkDrips907 New Member

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    I wish i could throw up like you mayne...-.-
    Exitus, what screamo said. just keep it simple for a while. that last ones a start. just keep workin on them and youll slowly progresss. thats how i did.
     
  9. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  10. milfhunter

    milfhunter Elite Member

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    hey so wats with the 666 writers pm u for?
     
  11. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    exitus-make your letters the same size
    rae-that last piece is fire
    hang-second sketch looks better
    void-nice simple
     
  12. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    im down, you want one in return?
     
  13. letsgobombin

    letsgobombin Senior Member

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    im in, do pocs, i'll get yours up asap but it'll prob be 2 days cus tomorrows my birthday and day after is school
     
  14. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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    im down... you want one back? i write rayz
     
  15. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    ill take u up on that

    Cans - theres too much space between ur letters try bringin em closer and lose the extensions

    some of my whack sketches
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    cover of my new blackbook
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  16. Sadistic.Child

    Sadistic.Child Elite Member

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    you still owe me something dickhead <3
    :D
     
  17. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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  18. FABLE IR CRU

    FABLE IR CRU Senior Member

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    I wanna get down on this ill do 1 for u as well,I rite Fabe
     
  19. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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  20. Shoook

    Shoook Senior Member

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    yo you live in the 250 area by any chance?
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    new sketch for new name