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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. fOrSaQeN

    fOrSaQeN Senior Member

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    lol @ deleted posts....
     
  2. b SQUARED 08

    b SQUARED 08 Senior Member

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    Snap- I like all of those, but especially those two throws.

    Keane- Lookin' good as usual other than the spelling error lol.

    Suphr- I'd go a bit simpler. Some of your letters (particularly the H and R on the last sketch) really throw off the flow, or lack thereof. Also, the sizes of the letters aren't consistent either. Keep at it.

    Armen- I'm feelin' your M and E, but the other letters don't exactly fit with them if you know what I mean...

    And since I've been extra busy with school and work lately, I haven't had the chance to hit the books, but here's my latest...
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  3. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    bump. can this negro get any crits?

    jest- try makin the tops of the j and t symetrical like the letters are. make the top of the s fit with the e more also
    armen- nice throw, thers something im not feelin about the e, but i cant put my finger on it
    snap- basically just keep doin what your doin
    suphr- pretty fresh style, but especially in the bottom one work on your r
     
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  4. (SoS)Viruz

    (SoS)Viruz Elite Member

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    Bumb for Crits. I didnt get any on the last page.:(
     
  5. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    i would say turn the t around so its opposite of the r, then make the tops of the e and a the same. letters are decent though for sure
     
  6. NoCanControl

    NoCanControl Elite Member

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    a parady to 206 writers hit me up.

    just to make fun of people who do that stuff.

    but soon after i posted that. i remembered camp six six six.

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    and plus my area code is

    6 6 6 _ _

    haha, so its whatever man.
     
  7. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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    Suphr I like all your stuff. Just try to make the H and R a little bit smaller. It looks off with them so much bigger than all the other letters. Tear that's pretty sick for being so simple. I like the structure. Just add a little more to it. maybe some 3D and a forcefield or little bits inside the letters.

    I'm between names right now. So bear with me if this sucks.
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  8. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    (SoS)Viruz
    it looks alright
    the t is covered up a bit to much by the e
    realy feling that flow in the keep it that way
    just would have done small changes with the middle bar the check it out
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    the a R is sick my friend :)

    seywhat its dope whould be nice do
    see some shit from you with a lil effort mate

    fOrSaQeN

    your throw says armen right ?
    looks sweet the a isnt working man looks weird the other letters have alot more style work on that
     
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  9. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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  10. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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    Ohsnap your name pretty much describes your pieces. Unbelievable. 10/10 for the toy forum. I forgot to crit Jest. I'm really diggin the fat bottoms. It looks real clean too. The only thing I would say is change the S somehow. It looks too much like the J to me.
     
  11. fOrSaQeN

    fOrSaQeN Senior Member

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    bridge the top gap of the e.s.o.. flare out the L a bit to the right to cover that dead space and that last E dips down longer then the rest of the letters just doesnt look even



    thanks for the crits gents...ill try on working with similar flows
     
  12. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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    Forsaqen it seems like there's too much going on in the middle of the E. Otherwise it's dope. I especially like the tag below it. I've never seen marker flares. haha
     
  13. fOrSaQeN

    fOrSaQeN Senior Member

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  14. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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    Bump for crits
     
  15. skeetz

    skeetz Senior Member

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  16. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    i was planning on doing a little sketch tonight but i dont have access to a scanner ... so heres my last sketch repost.

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  17. Batman_Onest

    Batman_Onest Banned

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    wack

    go back to ur old style, this wannabe euro aint crackin ya deeeg
     
  18. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    Nah .. no way.
    Im staying with what i have ..

    if your talking about a wanabee European like style then i have to disagree...iv never once gone for a European style or claimed to rock one since i stopped doing the " wanabee LA Revok style "...if your looking for a wanabee European style then look at that Mar One prick.

    " wanabee euro " ... how could i be a wanabee European ?
    Hahah but still cheers for your feedback.
     
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  19. Zire

    Zire Senior Member

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    speedy- nice work, good proportions and simple letter. i personally think the name "dove"(if it aint already taken) would be a better name than dovs.
    skeetz- nice and simple and actually..quite good
     
  20. white

    white Senior Member

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    irekn - great color use
    Bash - i like the one with the blue 3D, the one with the big pink thing inbetween ur letters needs to go
    ohsnap - your piece with the blue to yellow and red and back to yellow and blue is amazing
    mass - im gonna have to agree, like your old style more

    here are some i have done in the last couple weeks CRITS???
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