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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
lol @ deleted posts....
Snap- I like all of those, but especially those two throws.
Keane- Lookin' good as usual other than the spelling error lol.
Suphr- I'd go a bit simpler. Some of your letters (particularly the H and R on the last sketch) really throw off the flow, or lack thereof. Also, the sizes of the letters aren't consistent either. Keep at it.
Armen- I'm feelin' your M and E, but the other letters don't exactly fit with them if you know what I mean...
And since I've been extra busy with school and work lately, I haven't had the chance to hit the books, but here's my latest...
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bump. can this negro get any crits?
jest- try makin the tops of the j and t symetrical like the letters are. make the top of the s fit with the e more also
armen- nice throw, thers something im not feelin about the e, but i cant put my finger on it
snap- basically just keep doin what your doin
suphr- pretty fresh style, but especially in the bottom one work on your r
Bumb for Crits. I didnt get any on the last page.
i would say turn the t around so its opposite of the r, then make the tops of the e and a the same. letters are decent though for sure
a parady to 206 writers hit me up.
just to make fun of people who do that stuff.
but soon after i posted that. i remembered camp six six six.
and plus my area code is
6 6 6 _ _
haha, so its whatever man.
Suphr I like all your stuff. Just try to make the H and R a little bit smaller. It looks off with them so much bigger than all the other letters. Tear that's pretty sick for being so simple. I like the structure. Just add a little more to it. maybe some 3D and a forcefield or little bits inside the letters.
I'm between names right now. So bear with me if this sucks.
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it looks alright
the t is covered up a bit to much by the e
realy feling that flow in the keep it that way
just would have done small changes with the middle bar the check it out
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the a R is sick my friend
seywhat its dope whould be nice do
see some shit from you with a lil effort mate
your throw says armen right ?
looks sweet the a isnt working man looks weird the other letters have alot more style work on that
hey snap if your ever hungry dont be afraid to ask for a bite
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Ohsnap your name pretty much describes your pieces. Unbelievable. 10/10 for the toy forum. I forgot to crit Jest. I'm really diggin the fat bottoms. It looks real clean too. The only thing I would say is change the S somehow. It looks too much like the J to me.
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bridge the top gap of the e.s.o.. flare out the L a bit to the right to cover that dead space and that last E dips down longer then the rest of the letters just doesnt look even
thanks for the crits gents...ill try on working with similar flows
Forsaqen it seems like there's too much going on in the middle of the E. Otherwise it's dope. I especially like the tag below it. I've never seen marker flares. haha
Bump for crits
speedy-nice bar proportions
forsaqen- the L is way too small
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i was planning on doing a little sketch tonight but i dont have access to a scanner ... so heres my last sketch repost.
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go back to ur old style, this wannabe euro aint crackin ya deeeg
Nah .. no way.
Im staying with what i have ..
if your talking about a wanabee European like style then i have to disagree...iv never once gone for a European style or claimed to rock one since i stopped doing the " wanabee LA Revok style "...if your looking for a wanabee European style then look at that Mar One prick.
" wanabee euro " ... how could i be a wanabee European ?
Hahah but still cheers for your feedback.
speedy- nice work, good proportions and simple letter. i personally think the name "dove"(if it aint already taken) would be a better name than dovs.
skeetz- nice and simple and actually..quite good
irekn - great color use
Bash - i like the one with the blue 3D, the one with the big pink thing inbetween ur letters needs to go
ohsnap - your piece with the blue to yellow and red and back to yellow and blue is amazing
mass - im gonna have to agree, like your old style more
here are some i have done in the last couple weeks CRITS???
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