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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. bloot

    bloot Member

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  2. Infoe

    Infoe Senior Member

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    supposed to have space.. Wanna tell me how to fix it? I can tell people I don't like shit all day.
     
  3. spaceratk

    spaceratk New Member

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    thanks yall. Yo infoe i think what he means is the diagonal leg is sticking out too far making the R look alot wider than the other letters when it shouldn't.
     
  4. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    yo info i like that infor but i think you should have just done the o regular without the one
     
  5. synps

    synps Senior Member

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    Ohsnap- feeling the piece, I like the collage in it lol. The throwie is alright I think you need to work on the face and ditch the bar at the top right of the h and the top right of the s they dont look right
    infor- i like it alot, that I is really nice. I'd say to loose the 1 in the middle of the o though

    I got two new ones, one was an exchange with mmm burgers, other one a new style for me tell me what you guys think
    ai5.photobucket.com_albums_y180_kennysphotos_graff002.jpg
    ai5.photobucket.com_albums_y180_kennysphotos_graff001.jpg
     
  6. fOrSaQeN

    fOrSaQeN Senior Member

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  7. SNAP!

    SNAP! Senior Member

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    that s in that ohsnap peice is ugly. no beef intended. especialy the top
     
  8. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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    Ohsnap the only thing wrong with that throwie is the shadow on the top of the O is way too narrow.
     
  9. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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  10. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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    Infoe you have mad talent but I'm not sure about your publicity with it. I'd never do sketches in school. That could just be my paranoia but all it takes is one dickhead teacher that sees your shit on a wall and makes the connection and you're screwed.
     
  11. -sense-

    -sense- Senior Member

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    sacwacko-i dont know about the K kinda like a t and a i. maybe some more defination or somethin.

    some more bars
    ai34.tinypic.com_1z3a554.jpg
    ehhh
     
  12. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    than one letter burns your whole entire blackbook, no beef


    sense keep your bars even bro
     
  13. beyondyereyes

    beyondyereyes Senior Member

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    sense bring the letters closer and like ohsnap said make sure everything is as straight and even as possible.

    [Broken External Image]:http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/giant1.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/giant2.jpg

    my best so far. far from perfect but point out the flaws i may have missed.

    and here are some regular sketches.

    [Broken External Image]:http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/clipper.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/gg278/unholygrave/knight.jpg

    tell me how i should go about finishing them off and turning them into something a lot more presentable.
     
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  14. klic

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    some back to school sketching...

    just playing around with different letters,
    [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/AIKRPiece.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SKAPiece.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SNPiece.jpg

    throw ive been working on,
    [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELThrow.jpg
    tag
    [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/SHPELRedTag.jpg

    tower - everythings looking good except i dont like the w or e on the top piece
    sense - bring your letters closer together and keep using bars
    infor - that looks sick as hell

    crits please
     
  15. SNAP!

    SNAP! Senior Member

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    Keep painting for the internet kid. I posted old shit, especially that snap, i even said i dont write that anymore..

    Go off that, i dont give a fuck, its quick straight letters, and if you say straight letters are wack, look around your area kid...its the local steez, and it's what i like. fuck if i care who likes it or not, its for me. not the internet.
     
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  16. Mr yarbles

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    Quit with the fucking beef I'm tired of seeing this shit everywhere


    Oh snap I don't like your s and all your letters look stubby and fat, no offense if you made some of the bars longer or made the width of some smaller it'd look good
    that throw is bump though

    klic take off the extra extensions and bars hat arn't vital to the letters and work from there
    also the aikr looks pretty good the a just needs some fixin
    and the shpel throw is nice work on the tag alot though go back to simples

    tower lose the extenion on the bottom left of that t you're stuffs got a nice kinda old school feel to it

    info work on your bars, some just look too fat it's good though

    forsagn I'm diggin it

    I tried to hit everyone don't bitch at me.
     
  17. klic

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    thanks yarbles, probably one of the first crits ive got that hasnt said "new to graff thread" haha
     
  18. Stussy

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  19. beyondyereyes

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    stussy: rayz? i think you should get rid of the space within the letter "R" also i would change the "Y" a little so it isn't so jagged since no other letters are like that. i'm digging it though.

    klic: for aikr i suggest bending the "R" more and fixing the top of the "A".
     
  20. osnapizzel

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    yarbles my nikkaa!! thanks for the most useful critts in a long time