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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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  2. synps

    synps Senior Member

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    lol toy beef.
    klic- I like the first two simples. the third sketch is alright, the 3d looks a bit off to me. I think your p needs work in your throwie, it just looks to plain. Try outlining and dropshadowing your throwies too.
    speedy- nice simple. Space that s out a bit more its too close it. And work on your tags.

    Bump for crits!
     
  3. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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    Thanks. I'm not happy with any of those tags. Everything you see in that pic is pretty much my first attempt at the new name. If I were you I'd try to make the first bar on the M a little longer. And the Y doesn't look right with the middle being completely cut off from the rest of it in the "Syn" pic. Mainly because the S and N are just one shape with no separation.
     
  4. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    its been a minute....
    dous-straightletters kill all the bends and shit for a little bit longer
    stussy-remind mes of sexwithoutrubbers...none of your letters flow to get her,try to keep em simple and all the same size

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    debating weither or not i should go back to do(ap)...thoughts any one?
     
  5. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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  6. sanrtizer

    sanrtizer Senior Member

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    sense- nice simples comin along, try overlappin a wee bit now
    tower- the top one looks like it says tuwer, on the second one if ur gonna do that little extension thing on the T whice looks whack imo do it on the R too to make it somewhat symetrical. tight drawings too
    klic- jus keep messin around wit bars and simps ull catch on pretty quick (hopefully).........on that toss make the S less lumpy nah meen and on that tag take out the addons nd keep playin wit it
    stussy- the lettrs arent bad but they dont flow as a whole....try to make each letter different in their own way but at the same time flow together
    speedy- ur on the rite track keep at it bro
    synps- tone that shit down for a lil dont add those lil swirlies or doodads
    mightve tried to get a bit too technical but ill c wat u guys hav to say
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    CRITS PLEASE
     
  7. elmers

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    to many arrows and bullshit
     

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  8. Rooftop Resident

    Rooftop Resident Senior Member

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    it looks fine to me, the letter isn't super flashy, but it seems like too many people give such generic advice... (Work on your bars, do more simples, make your letters the same size) Who makes these rules? Most of the time I look at people who comment and their shit isn't anything to look at. I didn't look in this case, I don't want to start any beef. I'm just saying, if you like your shit, that's really what matters and fucking do what you want.
     
  9. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    no, youre pretty much just too paranoid
    kids see my shit all the time and dont say shit about it, they ignore it cause they cant read it
     
  10. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    ok well im going to go ahead and embarrass myself a little to prove a point to you rooftop , this is my shit from pretty much exactly a year ago when i just started writing. before i knew of bombing science and was the only writer i knew lol. I THOUGH THAT THIS WAS THE SHIT

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    see its good that you like your shit, but you usually always do even when its toy as hell
     
  11. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    bottom page bumper cars
     
  12. sanrtizer

    sanrtizer Senior Member

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    bump new page
     
  13. osnapizzel

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  14. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    your phillies suck
     
  15. sanrtizer

    sanrtizer Senior Member

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    i didnt know an arrow classified it as a philly so let me correct you ** your hands suck **
    thanks d3wd and last i saw your peices suck although that was like 6 months ago ;:cool:
    so im not just yappin
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  16. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    how about you dont act like a little smartass about some shit that you cant even execute properly, the style looks like half the motherfuckers who start out trying to do phillies with loops and shit, and it looks like shit

    i wasnt referring to the arrow you dumbass

    dont get pissy cause im honest about your shit, thats what i thought when i saw the hand
    "damn, that philly is pretty bad"
    so i said it, and most people would agree with me that the hand is ugly
     
  17. sanrtizer

    sanrtizer Senior Member

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    and you sed i got pissy daaaamn meng take a valium or some shit....that "ugly hand" is how i started to find flow wit my tags cause it flows in like 2 lines i didnt try to make it look philly it developed that way shitty or not im done wit e arguements pm if u wana say ne more
     
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  19. acereborn

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    feelin that, but at the very end of it (top of p), it doesnt flow at the top. just make a little bump on top of the p, if you get what i mean lol
     
  20. Scratch

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    smooth, im liking your letter structure
    ohsnap- loving your shit, you reminded me i need more women in my book X]
    sanrtizer- pretty good, id lose the arrows on the sides if i were you though

    im just working on throws right now cause what i need the most improvement on right now.

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    crits please?