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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
Last bump for crits on this one.
lol toy beef.
klic- I like the first two simples. the third sketch is alright, the 3d looks a bit off to me. I think your p needs work in your throwie, it just looks to plain. Try outlining and dropshadowing your throwies too.
speedy- nice simple. Space that s out a bit more its too close it. And work on your tags.
Bump for crits!
Thanks. I'm not happy with any of those tags. Everything you see in that pic is pretty much my first attempt at the new name. If I were you I'd try to make the first bar on the M a little longer. And the Y doesn't look right with the middle being completely cut off from the rest of it in the "Syn" pic. Mainly because the S and N are just one shape with no separation.
its been a minute....
dous-straightletters kill all the bends and shit for a little bit longer
stussy-remind mes of sexwithoutrubbers...none of your letters flow to get her,try to keep em simple and all the same size
debating weither or not i should go back to do(ap)...thoughts any one?
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nuts thats fresh but you should use more letters so i can really get a feel of your style
sense- nice simples comin along, try overlappin a wee bit now
tower- the top one looks like it says tuwer, on the second one if ur gonna do that little extension thing on the T whice looks whack imo do it on the R too to make it somewhat symetrical. tight drawings too
klic- jus keep messin around wit bars and simps ull catch on pretty quick (hopefully).........on that toss make the S less lumpy nah meen and on that tag take out the addons nd keep playin wit it
stussy- the lettrs arent bad but they dont flow as a whole....try to make each letter different in their own way but at the same time flow together
speedy- ur on the rite track keep at it bro
synps- tone that shit down for a lil dont add those lil swirlies or doodads
mightve tried to get a bit too technical but ill c wat u guys hav to say
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to many arrows and bullshit
it looks fine to me, the letter isn't super flashy, but it seems like too many people give such generic advice... (Work on your bars, do more simples, make your letters the same size) Who makes these rules? Most of the time I look at people who comment and their shit isn't anything to look at. I didn't look in this case, I don't want to start any beef. I'm just saying, if you like your shit, that's really what matters and fucking do what you want.
no, youre pretty much just too paranoid
kids see my shit all the time and dont say shit about it, they ignore it cause they cant read it
ok well im going to go ahead and embarrass myself a little to prove a point to you rooftop , this is my shit from pretty much exactly a year ago when i just started writing. before i knew of bombing science and was the only writer i knew lol. I THOUGH THAT THIS WAS THE SHIT
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see its good that you like your shit, but you usually always do even when its toy as hell
bottom page bumper cars
bump new page
maybe if i posted in the big boy i would get more critts, harsh....but critts nevertheless
your phillies suck
i didnt know an arrow classified it as a philly so let me correct you ** your hands suck **
thanks d3wd and last i saw your peices suck although that was like 6 months ago ;
so im not just yappin
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how about you dont act like a little smartass about some shit that you cant even execute properly, the style looks like half the motherfuckers who start out trying to do phillies with loops and shit, and it looks like shit
i wasnt referring to the arrow you dumbass
dont get pissy cause im honest about your shit, thats what i thought when i saw the hand
"damn, that philly is pretty bad"
so i said it, and most people would agree with me that the hand is ugly
and you sed i got pissy daaaamn meng take a valium or some shit....that "ugly hand" is how i started to find flow wit my tags cause it flows in like 2 lines i didnt try to make it look philly it developed that way shitty or not im done wit e arguements pm if u wana say ne more
keep the shit talk to the pms seriously
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feelin that, but at the very end of it (top of p), it doesnt flow at the top. just make a little bump on top of the p, if you get what i mean lol
smooth, im liking your letter structure
ohsnap- loving your shit, you reminded me i need more women in my book X]
sanrtizer- pretty good, id lose the arrows on the sides if i were you though
im just working on throws right now cause what i need the most improvement on right now.
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