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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    the big boy thread isn't supposed to be for crits.
     
  2. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Smooth-clean and good, add more letters!
    ohsnap-great improvement dude, and good looking stuff.
    scratch-nice style you got going, what's the first letter tho?
    sanr-like the first one(blue), not the other tho.

    Busted my finger bad so I can't draw well so just posting a flick of what I was able to get done today, going for a halloween theme.
    ai33.tinypic.com_2mywvmp.jpg

    EDIT: Progress from last sketch???
    ai38.tinypic.com_fz80h2.gif
     
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  3. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    make the bends of the h and e symmetrical on the top sketch, everything else basically already is. get that down and then just keep fuckin with it
     
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  4. Rooftop Resident

    Rooftop Resident Senior Member

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    I dunno, yeah that shit isn't good, but some people just repeat the same bullshit advice, even if the person is beyond it. On that piece, work on keeping your bars the same width would be good advice, info has decent little simple pieces. You were trying to do like wildstyle with no depth, blah blah. As for liking your shit even if it is super toy, I think I pretty much always knew when my shit stunk whether I knew real writers or not. All you have to do to see you aren't some super writer is take look into most graff mags or take a look online... but, if you don't like what your doing and don't think it's hot (or that you are getting better), why do it?
     
  5. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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    damn its been more than a minute...
    ai186.photobucket.com_albums_x155_rezn2007_CIMG1295.jpg
     
  6. osnapizzel

    osnapizzel Banned

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    yeah i get what your saying, the best advice you can get on this site is to use bars, bars are the shit start with simps, and just tweak them here an there, bend bars to match and flow but not necessarily all of them, and keep sketching. after a while you just progress


    logo i think you made the bottoms of the letter too thick
     
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  7. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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    ignore the ONE in the top, i already know
    ai440.photobucket.com_albums_qq123_LewisFarikon_Blackbook_SU1HMDAyNTMuanBn.jpg
     
  8. fonone

    fonone Senior Member

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    keep the top one, the bottom one is whack.
     
  9. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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  10. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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    bump from bottom of page
     
  11. Zire

    Zire Senior Member

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    Pane- likeing it.Couple of minor things though, the dark blue give the effect of a 3rd dimenson on the a and n but it looks odd with the p and e, was that the intentionall colour scheme? and the bottom of the e(the arrow) looks a little wide but other than that its pretty good. Your 3d work is good too.
     
  12. guz

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  13. Shiva.

    Shiva. Senior Member

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    pretty nice for a toy,
    might be a bit too busy though...
     
  14. LEGENDARYBEATLERS

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  16. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    that PANEONE simple at the top of the page is immencely good ... keep that up !
     
  17. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    I'm digging the bottom one, Flyt. Not so much the arrow on it, though.

    ai36.tinypic.com_2dtaw3l.jpg
     
  18. Shiva.

    Shiva. Senior Member

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    search for letters like that on www.dafont.com and copy them.
    and use different colors.
     
  19. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    Big blue violence - clean up your lines and colouring
    Flyt - lose the arrow thing but rest all looks good clean that shit up colour it and paint it
     
  20. ~~>ANTIK<~~

    ~~>ANTIK<~~ Senior Member

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