i figure i should post in and in the throwies forum since i guess my notebook is my black book until i start usin my real ones plus theres more crits in here. Mebi - i like your sketches man. keep it up Nagger - im feelin that sketch. Zeal - that piece is alright. jus keep sketchin. crits?? if you wana see my progress take a gander at the throwie section.
sketch3...i like the black dudes they have money XD lol now serious i like that its cool.... leaks...work on your lines dude....make them smooth [Broken External Image]:http://xs231.xs.to/xs231/08384/19-09-08_0012290.jpg new shit 0/0 mebir 0/0 crits?
that fill is unique MEBIR an its a nice sketch. i noticed my jagged lines right when they happened but i couldnt do anything to fix em without makin it look funny.
the dudes in black are the rich recored company excecutives runin the nigs life and the rapper is just an empty shell of his art form
i jus was messin around with different styles but any ideas for the D? i gotz way better work thn this but i think it would look nasty if i coukld come up wit a solid looking D any ideas pm me or w.e critz otherwise [Broken External Image]:http://i93.photobucket.com/albums/l72/hockeyplayer_01/0918081705.jpg
nah money's in there...he forgot got blah blah blah sneakers and blah blah blah *wack new dance move* and blah blah blah south.... masta dont write daze jupstick throw a shadow or 3d on it man..and keep at the simples
MastaT_ The D is weird man, the rest looks ok, but maybe you should go simpler jupsick_ those are good, keep it up Naggers_ that soup is so dope yo zeal_ I bet coloring in that page musta took forever I didnt really have anything to fill it with at school so I had to use a highlighter and the outline is pencil.
jupsik nice, keep at it....make all ur letters the same hight and similer weight leakes ist a bit bland an unorigional mexici i like the direction its gwanin, but make sure u dont forget the basics...do a nice steezy simple everynow n then
WINGS-yo i like the flow man...its pretty B.A- bad ass ZEAL-pretty decent bro work on the ends of ur letters MASTA-pretty kool work on ur letters tho.... i know i havnt posted much in a while so heres somethin i did lass nightt crits hit me up!! and i didnt like the hole thing lo so i cut it out when i was done http:// http://
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dude your bars are kina wierd and unlogical... i liked the down simple more... link...awsome job i lke it really clean... but the can is wierd kinda to smashed
Thanks, I'm trying to make my bars more bar-ish but it was really late at night when I did this. I was almost asleep.
not the point that u were half asleep... i mean your bars...have these pointy shit things that just come out of no where... just do plain simples...with no shit poping out of it