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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Maste

    Maste Senior Member

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    panda those e's are fresh man i liek them a lot and work on that s on the end its an s right...overall i like the piece but it looks squished
    aesk man i dunno whats wrogn but it seems off...i think it seems a little too squarish...try to round out the letter a little more
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  2. SANEKONE

    SANEKONE Senior Member

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  3. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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    well SANEK you dont really need any crits, your letters are nice and simple (except the N on the canvas, if it wasnt as wild it would fit better) other than that you just need to start developing you style in the direction you see fit.
     
  4. Rooftop Resident

    Rooftop Resident Senior Member

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    yo, that N is a bite or perhaps coincidence. I'm not into name dropping but the N on that last canvas looks a lot like someone I see up. My bad if it'd yours, just putting it out there.

    Edit: But good shit, it's nice to nicer shit in here, sometimes I feel like such a tard posting here.
     
  5. sank.

    sank. Senior Member

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    Well aren't you egotistical. Your putting yourself on some kind of altar that you don't deserve to be on. You've got some skills for only being 14, but god damb you bitch over everything. O and that thing about being able to burn any person in the toy forum... think again, there's some decent cats that lurk the toy forums.

    here's a crit and a pic to justify my rant.

    sanek - I'm diggin the second picture, but you should try using bars a bit more.

    Trying to develop some kind of steez..

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  6. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    ummmm...first off man,those are just SKETCHES so get your ego out of the clouds...and there are mad dudes in the toy forum just as good as if not better then you such as...tezer,hoer,amk(or what ever hes going by now),baze(although i dont think he posts in here anymore :/),fube,akel,raby...and we both know theres an assload more so hush with the im better then every one shit

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    an pen freestyle i liked for talking...
     
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  7. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    shut the fuck up. you're fuckin wack and until you realize it youre not gonna get any better. now stop cloggin up this thread with pointless talking.
     
  8. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    this piece was sponsored by alcohol and drugs last night
     
  9. Zire

    Zire Senior Member

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    Zase- i like it, clean and simple as always. Bash, Your arrogance will be your downfall.
     
  10. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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    Buhhhmp for crits
    Never get crits
    Unlike a few years back.

    This was the " crit ras thread "

    Anwhom.

    Zase .. again consitant flow throughout ... nice clean lines ... nice basic letters ... try making it more original now ... like adding different cuuuuurves and features to your letters so they dont just look like ordinary letters.
     
  11. HitemUp

    HitemUp Member

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    I dont like that one mass.
    Your older stuff is better.
    clean as fuck tho, like always.
     
  12. -sense-

    -sense- Senior Member

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    your handies are kinda groess and make the inside lines thick as well
     
  13. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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  14. CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K

    CROSS EM OUT AND PUT A K Senior Member

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  15. lawlcat

    lawlcat Senior Member

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  16. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    not so much an ideas as more of an uninspiered boring mess
    be original
     
  17. Bazer

    Bazer Moderator

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    the arm on the elite foot ninja looks funny sketch.
     
  18. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    yea, the top part was suposed to be baggy fabric, like theose gay deragonball z trousers, but i fucked it up by having his cloak black aswell, now it just looks deformed
     
  19. ice age

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  20. simple zen

    simple zen Elite Member

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    ^^your throwup G's look like C's.