Doke- yeah, the O looks like a U, the D is nice, K should be behind the O a little bit and the E does pretty much blow. You critiqued it yourself haha. Heres some more shit, my shitty scanner made the colors all washed out so sorry the outline is barely visible.
wow but wings u dont reespect me i always gave u teh long critz but w.e gl with getting more style down
Here gube, just do bars sort of like this... It's really rough, but it's the basic idea. ms paint so whatever. re-posting my shit.
Deo- lose the thing falling off the D, get rid of the extension on the e (the part that has rounded corners), and on the throw up DO- make the little bump thing on the bottom left of the D bigger. And I hate exclamation marks... your choice there though.
umm some new shit 0/0 and some old shit 0/0 [Broken External Image]:http://xs232.xs.to/xs232/08442/29-10-08_0558396.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://xs232.xs.to/xs232/08442/29-10-08_0557472.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://xs232.xs.to/xs232/08442/29-10-08_0556488.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://xs232.xs.to/xs232/08442/29-10-08_0555821.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://xs232.xs.to/xs232/08442/29-10-08_0552699.jpg crits? dope i like your shit as allways but the E in the simple is whack...try not rounding it so much hal cyon awsome i love it...flows and look good gube...use bars dude aegr(right? 0.0)...dude i like the e and the g the r and a not so much...looks to messy to me tho.. skin..keep tryin -_-
gyse- dope letters...but i bet if it had a darker outline it'd look super dope hal- pretty sick ..liken the style but i'm havin a hard time seein the letters smoove nuts- nice classwork....u must have a shitload of black paper huh jupsick- diggin the top cept the way its arraged and the bottom
jobs - pretty interesting style hal.cyon and jupstick doap and doap dope crits or comments appreciated
always loved your stuff monster, sick style. jobs you got crazy flow with those letters, nicely done. skin i like it for the most part, only thing i would cahnge is make the add on the I a little less extreme. meb nice solid simples, keep it up. hal i love that style, give it some color. trying to move this style a little bit.
threw some color on it, should of been watching that instead of the calzaghe/hopkins fight. eh. [Broken External Image]:http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/277/001ll5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img247.imageshack.us/my.php?image=001ll5.jpg doke - i like it, but the e doesn't seem to fit. fatten up the top of it a little. monster - i think both are dope, but i like the second better. jobs - nice and simple. i don't like the overlap of the j on the second.
Gyse, Hal cyon, smooth, jubstick, drek, libre and lawl, dope shit! Check out my new youtube vid: http://nl.youtube.com/watch?v=Ku9Rvq45J1c
Tasty- diggin you style. hal.cyon- dope shit. it flows and looks good. [Broken External Image]:http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/6737/dscn0789dw8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/dscn0789dw8.jpg/1/w640.png And fiksed in illustrator.. didnt like the coloring so much..:/ [Broken External Image]:http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/507/icesdog2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/icesdog2.jpg/1/w800.png
What isit ? ^. People do 3d objects and call it a 3d peice ... its more than that. I doubt you can even draw a good simple letter ... get the basics down before even beginning to develop a 3d style ... because developing 3d takes forever.