bottom looks like a straight up bite off Mr. Wiggles. style and flow only comes after the basics. i know you probably hear it all the time on here but simps help you develop your OWN style
nukes- go simpler and try to keep your letters all the same style. resp- tight style, your 3d is a little off tho on the right side. spades- go simpler on throwies and keep workin on them. on that wildstyle piece, almost all of the extensions are whack. [Broken External Image]:http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/raaaa_0002.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/fr7_0003.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/fr7_0001.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h44/graffiti78/sickkkk.jpg
badunkabump critisisms pyre: i like your style but i think if the letters were taller itd look better you know like less squished spades :your gunna hear thsi a lot and your gunna resist anyways but the thing is you needa use bars and start a lot simpler ... take a look at the new to graff thread cause it will get the basic idea in your head and then all you needa do is practice to the kid who wrote rime...if your gunna bite dont post it cause we know all about this shit and you most liekly will never get away from it...just practice your own shit dude
Project Link-Looks good keep it up. ESKIMO2-I like the peice just work on the letters...nice fill dark2-Letters are ok but not feeling that fill Klic-Not a bad start keep working those bars Montana-good shit White-try putting ur letters closer Wrekstyle-likeing that throw but the peice needs work Numberonestunna-Im really diggin that style, what markers you useing crits on me plz???
actually really feeling that dewster. M and the A are my favorite. joke it looks alright but i think the J doesnt go with the rest of the letters as well. late night, buzzed 'sketches'
Naw I see your idea in this, but it still looks stale no doubt. You gotta put less work into one letter and make it more complexed in an all together status no doubt. But the colors were str8, but it's somethin that isn't all that great all around. Stay up thought you knw? Show me what you can put up no doubt bro, Show off you know what I mean? lol
Yo, I wish we could of chilled in the 407 area, cause your letters are dope shiit, there madd clean. but naw yo, the lot of em are clean, but the D just needs work on the bottom of your letters no doubt. But shiits dope bro, your gettin madd close to that goal you set. No doubt. Stay Up. Lemme get some crits, and I'll hit you back.
YA...I'm getting that allot. lLolL Naw yo, Bubble letter throws are like my first shiits so I stuck with em. But naw, it's the E thats why. But Copes e has some space with the bottom of the e. But Ya...I get the Cope bite shit twice already. But I'm no biter.
hardly could call it a bite [Broken External Image]:http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/04052008132755Cope2throwup.jpg halo what part of orlando u in??
i really like the cee's...even tho they look simple i cant really do the bubble stuff, anyway... [/IMG] [/IMG] [/IMG] [/IMG] crits would be appreciated....
I just did two letters and tried a few new things because I got questionable responses on my earlier post. Comments? [Broken External Image]:http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/9199/gggglq6.jpg