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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
yea i dont like the way the R covers too much of the I tho
Sapd - (or Beas One) yeah the letters them selves are okay. But those drips and splits dont look to good. But your getting better !
Infoe - I thinks its time you got into more techniquel type stuff, you sure showed everyone you could do made simples !
Also glad to see are liking my newer stuff !
Ilikekicks- feeling it, whats up with that thing at the bottom of your s though
skin- don't like it at all sorry
beas- keep working on those simples, loose the wing type thigs on your r and p
infoe- great simp
long ass sticker i made, disregard the shit in back of it
Can you tell me why you dont like it all, Telling me dont like it wont help me improve.. :/
And anyways your sketch look good, Everything but that extention on the e. Also the color looks best with orange & red.
i agree about the extension on the e. you should have left it, that way it mirrored the s.
I like the fill though. I think it looks awesome
For a battle:
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Yeah I didn't like the extension on the e either.
Skin- I just don't wanna start any beef or anything i just think a lot of your letter structure is off. I think if you left the bars at all the same width it would look nicer.
Wings, I've done more technical stuff in the past, haha.. I just like simple funk.
Here's some stuff from a while ago, oldest to newest;
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LETGO for a mate
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[Broken External Image]:http://i251.photobucket.com/albums/gg310/INFOE1/Picture-1-1.jpg
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Most of that's just freestyles when I was bored
does that say synupse?
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infoe- always have loved your style, no matter what it was
koke- like the character. I don't like all the extensions on the letters though
3 more from my book:
Haha, that face on the first one is awesome man.
infoe dope, oz rep
You style has developed so much!
Fucking love it bro, unique and fresh, some of the best shit I've seen in a while
seet_ i like it all cept the xs for the holes in the Es and the little arrow extension
infoe- i like the last one the best
anor- do the same peice without extentions
synps- digging it
monster- your m is really wierd. but you can still see it. everything else looks dope
ok heres some names im trying to decide on
critz would be appreciated
Damnn. The blackbook thread got pretty sick since I left. I really don't have any crits for anyone on this page except for keep it up. The only thing is, NO 1, There's already a Dank in Maryland.
Here's for an exchange with klic.
And here's one of my most recent throwie attempts with a new character idea. Tell me how much it blows.
looking good, i like the lettering
infoe- the last one is fresh
likin thar puzzle shpel too
Rozwell is a cool name and the dank looks crazy!
Alright everybody been tellin me to use bars and go simple so heres my first 2 ATTEMPTS:
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i hate the second one but...watever, post it anyway
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