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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. jupsick

    jupsick Senior Member

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    ^^
    keep going....
    but less couloring and more letter structure..
    make more small less coulorfull sketches more sketchy simple fast improves alot faster
     
  2. Sizzuurp

    Sizzuurp Senior Member

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    rozwell is an ill name. it looks real nice. the w is kinda hidden though. keep workin with it.
     
  3. kroc_oner

    kroc_oner Elite Member

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  4. Mass Appeal

    Mass Appeal Banned

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  5. kroc_oner

    kroc_oner Elite Member

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  7. kroc_oner

    kroc_oner Elite Member

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    welp ima have to go a step back
     
  8. Scino & Spank

    Scino & Spank Senior Member

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  9. "Bi2aR"

    "Bi2aR" Senior Member

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    new to graff thread
     
  10. MareImbrium

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    All in study so all criticism and comments are much appreciated.
     
  11. thaEEZYway

    thaEEZYway Senior Member

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    like everyone else said, tha name Rozwell is great, and that last dank peice at the bottom is ill. Rozwell the same way you did the dank would look insane
     
  12. ShIfTeD

    ShIfTeD Elite Member

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    sorry to bust your bubble but this shits a mess bro, unnesicary extentions, your letter structure isnt really there, your 3D is all over the place , your missing 3D in quite a few areas

    stick to simples until you get that shit down man, you have so many extentions that you even confused yourself when you did the 3D
     
  13. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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  14. Scino & Spank

    Scino & Spank Senior Member

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    fair enough, this better for working on simps? ai37.photobucket.com_albums_e96_ScinoandSpank_PICT0118.jpg I know the handstyles bunk...
     
  15. ShIfTeD

    ShIfTeD Elite Member

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    jetpack...looks pretty good, id love to see that outlines, that little extention you have on the outside of the left side of your r, you should do on the a

    spank...thats not simples man...hahahaha, trust me bro, ive gone through many many many stages since i started writing, several times having to resort back to simples, i mean the basic form of a letter, no extentions, no 3d...master that steez man...trust me, because if you stick to what your doing now and you try to develop that further, you'll get lost and your style will be pure shit

    if you go back to simps and slowly work your way up, you can define your style and really get everything down...extentions arent necisary until you get simps down

    ill give it to you though, your 3d is more solid on this one

    excuse my spelling :/
     
  16. acereborn

    acereborn Elite Member

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    take off all the random extensions, make it simpler. your shits a mess

    looks good, glad to see the progression happening, but bring down the right leg of the A and put an extension in to even it out
     
  17. Scino & Spank

    Scino & Spank Senior Member

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    well...its simplER, atleast. haha
     
  18. lawlcat

    lawlcat Senior Member

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    liking the new stuff rasek, looking forward to seeing the rest of it. progreession is good.
    mare id start from scratch, way too much going on with no structure.
    scino as far as simps go thats far from it. keyboard letters and develop as such.

    fucking around, getting distracted with characters and whatnot.
    ai39.photobucket.com_albums_e174_trevronious_sdfsd.jpg
     
  19. librelikespie

    librelikespie Senior Member

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  20. C3ZR ONE

    C3ZR ONE Moderator

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    Bump. What's fresher than fresh???? That first sketch and that durty handstyle.. Respect.