osnap- i personally like the grungy fill, and great letters man tastie- looks good, the E does look a little out of place with the 2 thin parts coming off. i just drew this one (says NECRO), its all sloppy but i have run out of erasers, crits anyway. [Broken External Image]:http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd308/Zelve/Graf/graf11.jpg
JETPACK! damn man its been some time! haha i remember when you first started doin simpleee ass straights, youve gotten so much better! keep it up man! zase shit is lookin dope too and fube, shit is mad steezy!
what kind of crit is just saying the word 'bump'? anyways.... new to graff thread. come back in a few weeks when you can do straight letters and 3d and your lines arent shaky.
when you bump something, that means its good, and you like it, and you wanna keep moving it along for other people to see.. its a good thaaang
Dews, your D isnt as dope as the other three letters which are off the hook. and i like the funky style and coloring. Tastie the coloring looks good but the letterform could use a bit of work. I personally think it would look better with the a and i the same size as your other letters and maybe space them out a tad more. i like the way you do your Ts its simple and works well. your S needs some work. It lacks the flow that is expected from an S. the curves of it are a bit jerky and dont flow as well as they could. Your E would look better without the tail off the bottom leg of it and maybe shrink the bottom leg too and give the middle one more space. as it is it looks wierd because the middle leg is like a little shrunken noodle. maybe give the center leg more of a rectangular shape. its lookin alright though i like it. I haven't posted on here in forever. just some pen sketches from class the last few days. [Broken External Image]:http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l8/IanCasserole/ACEONE1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l8/IanCasserole/DIMOS1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l8/IanCasserole/MASTer1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l8/IanCasserole/METH1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l8/IanCasserole/WIREd1.jpg
Drew this last night when I was really high and drunk, and scare 2 besides that first one I like most them, although that mast one.. that s bar is to small. View attachment 424406
View attachment 424408 retouch of an old sketch. I know that it's wack, especially the stars. scare: I really like the ACE and METH sketches. Keep that meth style progressing man. Wings: I think that the arrows on the S kind of throw that piece off balance.
WINGS- youve got a bunch of little doo dads and extensions in there but they hardly match. might be something to think about in the future.
Scare2 and Wings, if Wings' 'S' was a bit more simplified, I wouldn't mind seeing your stuff on a wall, keep it up, the one with the power lines is dope as fuck Scare.
thanks guys, yeah those are all pen sketches with just a bic ballpoint so i didnt do any color, haven't for a while, i like the way you just commit to your letters and style when you cant erase and not worrying about color keeps my focus on the letterform and flow as apposed to flare and color. Wings, everyones hating on your S but its dooope. the extensions on the left have hella nice flow. the rest of your piece isnt as wild which kinda throws it off but your letters are solid and the style is really dope. the only part that i dont like is the extension off the bottom left of the N, you can barely see it and it doesnt have much flow with the shape of the letter so it just kind of adds clutter.
Here you go, something with a little less extentions (that K was an accident waiting to happen). View attachment 424421
skin the s should have been up as high as the rest of the letters maste im not diggin any of that man, keep your letters straight in line with each other, even bars, screw the crazy fills, consistant outline, dont use tape either if you need to add something get a glue stick
for a battle that still hasnt been aproved after a week [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/MARCESimplesBattle.jpg skin - you could make that look really nice if you did what people told you and got rid of all that crap on your s and got rid of the cracks czar - the c and a dont go with the z and r at all, just keep all the letters the same style and size scare2 - looks good but in some of them it would look better if you kept all the bars the same width, and the backgrounds are a nice touch