yeah i agree, but its lookin dope, maybe just connect the bars on the middle of the A to make it look more like an A and less like an FI

 

something i did for rots^






last 4 obviously arn't in my book but id appreciate crits on them as well.

 

you ******.
I love those handies.
<3

 

haha holy shit bro, you posted for once, my bad about when you called me, i was fucking gone

 

I think it was fine without erasing the top.

 

looks good cognus but when running oua space just make a paper beside it some loose paper and some tape will do it just tape underneath so that u dont have to write over the tape and please dont use ms paint or so too fix things

 

it made it look like a k

 

midnight doodles.
i know the E on the first one is too tall..

 

crits?

 

all those mini bars on your letters look horrible, don't do them

you've got an alright idea of bar proportions. make sure your lines are parallel, for nice clean block letters. then you can twist and shape them to get better letters

and for now keep your letters the same height, or make a pattern of some sort with the heights.

zase - i like that

woe, get more familar with bars. i can tell your still guessing where your lines should be

 

Well I've never seen an entire sketch made of As before.

 

Zase very nice i think would look fresh just black and white black shadow
Woe use bars unless your trying to do throws.
i write a word then dont like it and change so
wrtiting mutiny atmo-

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^ Stop doing the inward cuts at the end of each extension. Like the tip of the L. It's ugly as hell. Drop those extensions at the end of the bars too. (Top of your Ys, Us, W, etc.) Other than that, looks good. Not a fan of the Y-U connecter, but you can get away with calling it Eurostyle or something. Haha.

 

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tens.

 

use more bars, if you fixed up the n and the s youd have a solid simple right there

 

task-do whatscheme said
woe-use some bars kuhed
staro-connect your a and r all together
zase-i like it
scheme-im feeling the second one
....i see rots is back with his sexy yet scary sig to kill us all and eat our flesh

just a quicky....my shadows off in a few places,anyway crits?

 

yo i like this a lot, super stylie! has a good flow to it, props