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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
but it does make you high.
the only way i start my day
All of you need to practice what you preach, you are STILL talkin shit and its been dead for a while. The kid asked for some crits and all of you straight hated on him instead of giving him some legit crits. I would do the same thing if you came at me like that. If you dont like him then just dont say shit, thats all. Otherwise this thread is just gonna be like a bunch of bitchin females!
Timeless- Those letters are dope bro, I wanna see so color from you now
Tasty- Im feelin that k, Im not really into the color combo though brotha
Zase- I like it, lets see some more of that shit.
this thread will always be full of kids who act like bitches on the rag. its the toy thread bro..
anyways, bump. i never get crits anymore. compliments are nice. but its not what im looking for.
zase, much love homie. but after you got called out. ive seen significant changes in your letters, so whether you bit or not. someones opinion changed your style completely. but, that being said. i like where your going now. taking a step back to re-advance your style never hurts. keep working with that cmore style. shits fresh, nearly flawless simples.
tasty sesame, those fills are funky. but work on the ERK and a bit on that I. the letters are being neglected for fill styles.
kill_fred. put a chip between the kick of your R and the loop, y'know? cuz right now it could be mistaken as a wack A. define the loop more kid. wordup.
que, just keep workin at it. you got the right idea and the best way to advance your style is countless sketches. sketch the same style 100 times. you'll see the letters develop a bit mroe each time
vandal. put your heart into it bro. your coming out with fruitless styles that arnt you, y'know? put more "you" into it, you'll prolly get better styles
I see you just joined this month....this happens alot in this thread man dont even bother with it. As for that vandal kid he needs to lose that attitude and I m sure people would stop "hating" on him. Look at some kids in here they post some pretty toy shit , but they can take the crits and dont start shit when someone tell them something they dont wanna hear.
edit: good shit rasek, you a great example of where rocking simps gets someone. I remember when you werer writing reign and post your shit leaps and bounds man. stay up
I gave dude crits, he just got all caught up on me asking if he was straight edge, I told him to check out the new to graff section cause I dont think he understands the bars concept, he blew up on me so what can I do.
Zase-I like it, only things that caught my eye was the right leg of the R could be pushed in a little bit and the fill on the C sorta looks flipped, but thats just because theres more red than blue and the other letters have more blue than red
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Im not a fan of the fill but I figured I cant color it in here at work since all we have is 2 highlighters so might aswell work on fills
speaking of gettin high
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thats one of the blunts Im smoking here at work today mr.ZRO
i just try too do new styles -_- its what every advanced toy should do
if ya have ya simples down change styles and later go back to the old style belive me
i have tons of pieces i dont post
thnx man good critism
i like your piece aswell cant spot any bad flaws
and i see that style developing dope
experiment with some hook ups to connect letters man
EDIT: that small R i the rasek piece is Hate i love it
use that one in a sketch man and add stuff on the rest like u did on the R but dont fuck the flow u can do it
im not sure if this stuff is good yet its a lil wilder than normal....and now that i look at it that bs one looks like shit to me
rasek-dont have cris on that particular piece cuz it looks like scribbles to me but on your style in general id say try to even it out more...like make the bars sticking out 1 way on one side of the piece and the other way on the other side...thats what i think at least
zase- nothing...i really like tha old school funk and its pretty on point
edit junk- its ite just work on bar widths
and im too lazy to go to the last page
^^not a fan of the first pick, its hard to see the details but the other two show promise
candy i like that S i like it a lot
whipped this up a minute ago, its a little sloppy on the edges though, and ignore the bullshit behind it.
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I know the blunts a lil sloppy but you can blame the stale ass rilo for that
ight idk when i 'll have yers as well mero
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srry for double post. but i really dgaf
cool ill post porbably on saturday.when i get my camera.
color optional shut the fuck up lol all i was sayin was blunts makes you high. do they not?. case in point.
Really new to this. I know I shouldnt add color until I get letters and 3D down...but I was bored. Advice?
What? I wasnt even talkin to you brotha. Besides if you puff then your already cool with me.
ink me, make your line thats make up your bars paralell. define your letters more. your R is hella wack. read the new to graff thread. it'll help you a lot.
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