No 1 - The only thing I would change is the R on the first one. I just know it can look and flow better, I just cant pinpoint how at this moment. You can definately color though. Zane - I think balance hit it on the head. Bink - I dont like it. Try bars and straight letters. Torn - The simp is ight, but I dont know about the R and A. Maybe ill just have to see the sketch first.. Toast - You got throws down. Fills and all. Tits! Skin - Its better than the stuff I used to see from you but I dunno. The extention on the bottom of the S just breaks and comes out of nowhere. Your 3D fade lines are all off as well. Try fillin the whole page with a similar piece...let me know if it comes out better or not.
You know I was actually considering doing that because it would look better big. And I also want to try and new fill. And I realize the 3d was off the whole time I was doing it, I want to fix that aswell !
Man im sorry but thats horrible. The letters have hideous structure and the coloring is just random and ugly. I think you should do keyboard simples not these what you call burners. With them random indents and bumps and wierd stuff (looks like some of your letters have tumors on them).. Anyways sorry for being harsh but someone has to tell you.
wings speaks the truf start with simps yo example^ and flik for talkin and the shit below my post is fucking uber clean and should be respected for it
Hey tech, think you could draw this man? If you can then you'll be on the right track and keep doing that untill we tell you do something else. View attachment 435940
Pfft you must be kidding me! haha, anyways heres something I re did. Rasta colors! xD View attachment 435970
been a while since ive posted anything but here goes.. bottom one there is for a friend, he liked what i was doing and said man if i ever wrote i would write nuance, do that lol on illustration board, for school pic i was drawing for shits and giggles most everything on the last page or so has been looking good. really digging that toast stuff, good work. zase that sketch is sick as well