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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. RAVOLT

    RAVOLT Member

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    whoa mars one, sorry bro i thought the new years was you

    well ur sketch is pretty tight tho

    i cant read it tho, but the extensions and shit are working well
     
  2. SIZEmcr

    SIZEmcr New Member

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  3. RAVOLT

    RAVOLT Member

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    hey man i can tell ur using bars its looking good, but to get crits u got crit the people before you as well

    so look back a couple posts and crit mine and marsone


    on ur first on try bringing the E closer in and on the second one make them all the same case
     
  4. SIZEmcr

    SIZEmcr New Member

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    thnks for the crit

    i like your style...just think you need to make your letters a bit thicker n space em out abit ...eerrr the R seems to be alot smaller than the rest
    hope this is usefull

    SIZE.MDS
     
  5. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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  6. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    Thanks bro, will do.
     
  7. MeNu$

    MeNu$ Guest

    yo eskimo looks pretty ill what do u write tho everything is different? anyone got crits on my stuff i posted a few pages back?
     
  8. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    I write Calors. I just do a lot of exchanges and new words.

    Ravolt- Do some simple straight letters.
    Mar- I like that style. Make the last letter flow with the first two.
    Pie- Letters are cool but work on coloring.
    Tryn- Work on making that flow.
     
  9. MeNu$

    MeNu$ Guest

    if no one is diggin my stuff im looking for a little more crit than just look at new to graf thread or connect the letters more... anyone?
     
  10. Kayel

    Kayel Member

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    well.... its a shitty job and i did go simpler but just to have it out there :)

    ( The N was forced. a lot. i couldn't get it to flow with everything else so i just gave up and.... well just fucking look at its shape :( )

    [Broken External Image]:http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/8297/rezenexplainedzq8.jpg

    Bump for crits.

    Eskimo i really love the Force one. it popsright off the page when you look at it
    Don't really like the purple on you'r first one, could've been done cleaner
     
  11. ESKiMO2

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  12. MeNu$

    MeNu$ Guest

    eskimo, your N looks like a K just go stright up on the last part of it other than that its dope
     
  13. Aesir

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    There is a Rez, Rezone, Rezer, and yes, most likely a Rezen. There is a particularly LARGE amount of names at

    www.robotswillkill.com

    This is of course why we need a list of ALL names currently taken, as to ensure there are no clones. That's just my opinion though. Also, eskimo, your work is pretty beast. Keep it up. Though I do concur with MeNu$,just going straight up with the N would have been better, though It still looks good.
     
    Last edited: Jan 2, 2009
  14. kill_fred

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  15. T-jay

    T-jay Senior Member

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    maro-your on the right track keep at it
    eskimo-you 3d is the shit,im not feeling the extension on the top right of your r's

    ai196.photobucket.com_albums_aa291_tim44pix_menjinx001_1.jpg

    ai196.photobucket.com_albums_aa291_tim44pix_menjinx002_1.jpg
     
  16. blunttokes

    blunttokes Elite Member

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    that last ones decent.
     
  17. PegCityBoy

    PegCityBoy Senior Member

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    eskimo i love your shit the fills are always dope the only thing i'm not feelin is that piece coming out at the top right of the R it seems to be comin out of nowhere meh jus my 2 cents
     
  18. TRY'N

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    kill_fred-- actually it's a good letter structure. put some 3D on it. you're on the right path.
    kayel-- that rezen pic i snot working at all. you can't even read it when you outline the letters. start simpler.
    t-jay-- the last one is the best one, but they all need work. try making your letters all the same height.
    erkimo2-- looks good to me. the fact that there's so many grooves and stuff from where all your bars meet drives me a little crazy and i think it's a little much sometimes but i love the colors and everything.

    thanks to those who gave me crits. i'm gonna re-do it today and probably post back tonight with a new pic.
     
  19. IlikePie

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  20. iThrow

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    ai44.tinypic.com_zxog3k.jpg
    first attempt with thaaat