hey brand new to this here sum of my stuff crits if u wundt mind

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srry 4 bad quailty pics =/

 

hey man i can tell ur using bars its looking good, but to get crits u got crit the people before you as well

so look back a couple posts and crit mine and marsone


on ur first on try bringing the E closer in and on the second one make them all the same case

 

thnks for the crit

i like your style...just think you need to make your letters a bit thicker n space em out abit ...eerrr the R seems to be alot smaller than the rest
hope this is usefull

SIZE.MDS

 

A few sketches from the last two weeks...

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And a collaboration I'm doing with my friend:

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Crits:
Size- Make it flow more.

 

Thanks bro, will do.

 

yo eskimo looks pretty ill what do u write tho everything is different? anyone got crits on my stuff i posted a few pages back?

 

I write Calors. I just do a lot of exchanges and new words.

Ravolt- Do some simple straight letters.
Mar- I like that style. Make the last letter flow with the first two.
Pie- Letters are cool but work on coloring.
Tryn- Work on making that flow.

 

if no one is diggin my stuff im looking for a little more crit than just look at new to graf thread or connect the letters more... anyone?

 

well.... its a shitty job and i did go simpler but just to have it out there

( The N was forced. a lot. i couldn't get it to flow with everything else so i just gave up and.... well just fucking look at its shape )

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Bump for crits.

Eskimo i really love the Force one. it popsright off the page when you look at it
Don't really like the purple on you'r first one, could've been done cleaner

 

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eskimo, your N looks like a K just go stright up on the last part of it other than that its dope

 

There is a Rez, Rezone, Rezer, and yes, most likely a Rezen. There is a particularly LARGE amount of names at

www.robotswillkill.com

This is of course why we need a list of ALL names currently taken, as to ensure there are no clones. That's just my opinion though. Also, eskimo, your work is pretty beast. Keep it up. Though I do concur with MeNu$,just going straight up with the N would have been better, though It still looks good.

 

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i suck i know....any crits?


and kayel.just drop that style dude,its not going anywhere.go dos ome simples or something

eskimo.sick.love the fill.

 

maro-your on the right track keep at it
eskimo-you 3d is the shit,im not feeling the extension on the top right of your r's

 

that last ones decent.

 

eskimo i love your shit the fills are always dope the only thing i'm not feelin is that piece coming out at the top right of the R it seems to be comin out of nowhere meh jus my 2 cents

 

kill_fred-- actually it's a good letter structure. put some 3D on it. you're on the right path.
kayel-- that rezen pic i snot working at all. you can't even read it when you outline the letters. start simpler.
t-jay-- the last one is the best one, but they all need work. try making your letters all the same height.
erkimo2-- looks good to me. the fact that there's so many grooves and stuff from where all your bars meet drives me a little crazy and i think it's a little much sometimes but i love the colors and everything.

thanks to those who gave me crits. i'm gonna re-do it today and probably post back tonight with a new pic.

 

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first attempt with thaaat