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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Worms

    Worms Guest

    ye keep your shit striaght... once u can rock a straight curve some bars and experiment.... once you can curve bars and acheive an overall flow lengthen and shorten certian bars... once you can do that pm me and ill tell u the next step lol jkss
     
  2. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    lol im walking [the] through writing too
     
  3. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    It's true. You need to get help from people who don't give a fuck about your feelings. It's all in the experience.
     
  4. CakeWalk99

    CakeWalk99 Senior Member

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    I would like to post this again (not to piss anyone off, but to receive criticism)

    White: Its always a good idea to practice keeping the bars in line/straight before bending them. Im not here to sound mean or anything man, but the K almost looks like an X. That phone drawing is phat, so you can obviously come up with something legit as hell as long as you try. Keep doing what youre doing and good things will come :)......stick with the bars and progress when you think youre ready.

    I know my markers are garbage and probably 15 years old.

    Messed up with most of the 3-d and on the E's 3-d
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  5. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    id make the 2nd one's letters closer, fix the shadow on the M
    yea the E's shadow on the firstone is messed up. but also the flow is kinda wack XD
     
  6. aspen1

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    ai488.photobucket.com_albums_rr250_aspenfuek_galant001.jpg

    I also put this in the pen freestyle forum, but id liek to hear crits from here too :)
     
  7. Raisedbywolves

    Raisedbywolves Senior Member

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  8. exitus

    exitus Senior Member

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    lies is taken isnt it?
    also r u around 330
    also dont even bother with color especially if your using crayola or something
     
  9. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    Not really digging the L this time, wolf.
     
  10. sike_21

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  11. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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    huh?
     
  12. Scheme*119

    Scheme*119 Elite Member

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    ai40.tinypic.com_112ednc.jpg
    exchange with ohsnapizzlenizzlebitchfullthrottlecharlie'sangels3, yes i know the n is shit
     
  13. MaNtS

    MaNtS Senior Member

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    No beef jetpack, but as im sure you can recognise since my last response, its been less then 15 hours and its a couple pages back.

    Tot blackbooks gets filled with unfinished sketches/throws etc as people are practicing, so thats great and thats why the environment works for those at that stage,

    What im saying isnt to do with my skilllevel or myself thinking im better then i am, thats an easy pigeon-holeing technique though. But i dont want to put work into a sketch to post it here and have it burried pages back by people bumping there first ever graffiti sketch cause no-one critted them.

    Would prefer to somehow get the big boy books like an experienced version of this thread, that includes crits,coments,sketches etc etc from the more skilled writers(not burners only, but those that have obviously taken a step in the right direction toward style from that blurred line between the extents of surpassing being "toy" and the begining stages of having "style".

    So its not about me, even if i dont post there, ide rather see the experienced thread full of experienced pictures rather then mismatched text due to posts being deleted between posts from some of those you mentioned earlier, meso/cher etc.

    Surely you dont have to be "out for e-fame" once you are good enough to post in the big boys books, that in itself shows reflection of "doubted skill on an individuals part" moreso then myself argueing my point of equality.

    End of the day surely you can be good and post in there without being branded ego hungry, rather then those will skill posting here and having their stuff flooded out and pretending they dont mind because its better to be able to stand up and say things like " im good and i still post in toy thread, im anti-ego" not an attack on yourself, but thats the way your original post came off,
    Heres some older ish just for posting.
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    Now i gotta hit the sketchbooks myself as to not add to the problem im addressing.
     
  14. B.S. POLICE

    B.S. POLICE Banned

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    yeah dude ive been having kids start shit with me all day cause of tha blackbook thing. fuck it its only bombingscience.

    kno wha i mean?
     
  15. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    MaNtS - i rly like the way u did that first sketch and second i aint rly feelin the last one tho, wonderin if u wanna exchange?
    MUE - ur missin 3d on ur simples which look alot better then the first sketch
    Aspen - try rounding ur corners
    Sike - Clean it up
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    crits?
     
  16. CakeWalk99

    CakeWalk99 Senior Member

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    Im not asking this to be a smartass in anyway, but can you please explain to me what I am missing on my 3-d? I appreciate you mentioning that. Thanks dude.
     
  17. littlerocky

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  18. Evasion Of Invasion

    Evasion Of Invasion Senior Member

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    other then the fact u dont have a determined vanishing point theres no 3d on the middle of the M
     
  19. MaNtS

    MaNtS Senior Member

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    Indeed ive seen some of the responses youve recieved,

    However due to graffiti being an artform and art in itself being so open to interpretation and personal opinion, what i may percieve to be dope, might seem like tacky trash in comparison to that of wich you idolise.

    And as such we are presented with a skewed conundrum(?).

    Ps, evade check pms
     
  20. B.S. POLICE

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