lol i dont know what it is looked like a yellow shitty ninja lol

 

Yea it was supposed to be gort the robot but i fucked up LOL! its all good but the letter shapes are cool..or ???

 

whatever that yellow dude is in the first one you did

 

nah man not really not clean at all

 

Lol alright man all good improvement =D

 

Mue: Keepin it simple its good...add some color to that shit
Zase: I'm lovin your style keep postin them up
Rays: Keep working on that last one it has potential
Dank: I know wildstyle is fun man, but you dont develop style by going complex right off the bat. Its worth the time to start simple and then proceed.

my webcam sucks

 

gort, dont be hesitant to take some time on just simple letter structure before you dive into complex colours and wildstyle.

tink, loose those random white lines throughout your thing the ones on the outline is fine, its the random ones in the middle of the letters

mue, those letters look good. only the first E has a weird flow to it at the bottom.


heres my finished 2 page.

 

lol yeah if you look closely the whites inside the letters are a white-shadow for the turquoise shapes inside. I guess I could blame my webcam for lack of contrast but yes they are pretty random looking

 

I Airbrushed the Hulk and this is the out come. Crits? (A YES HO's I have bening giving hella crits check the pages I just decided to finaly post a pic)

[Broken External Image]:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/HULK.jpg

(Close Up)
[Broken External Image]:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Hulk-TEAR-ONE.jpg

 

lolwat... thats incredible, i would have posted it in the other artwork thread

 

Im postin it EVERYWHERE Too kool for BS.

 

[Broken External Image]:http://img387.imageshack.us/img387/6426/photo709gh8.jpg
finished
the color doesn't look great bc of the webcam...

 

thanks bro

 

for sek
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yo dude thanks for that heres yours

 

something simple i did at work, any crits