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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Masta T

    Masta T Senior Member

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    Didnt come out tht good the white paintmarker i used jus giot soaked into the the aper n smugged i was pissed but critz? not one of my bests =/
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    Opt nice shit man
    Snew - very easy to read, creative, fukn golden =D fresh shit
    Drake - id change ur d an move ur D n R closer together
     
  2. Snew

    Snew Senior Member

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    say- lose the arrows.. keep workin with those bars.. it looks like you kind of understand it..
    opte- i cant read the first letter at all.. clean up your bars a bit and lose a few of those extensions
    drake- i really dig that throw.. theres a dude around here who has a style like that.the seond d looks better..
    soath- keep your bars the same width- your 3d is way off.. and looks like you did a 3d in some places and a dropshadow in others.. other than that just keep hittin the books..

    any more crits from above?
     
  3. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    That second drake toss goes too hard.
     
  4. Edward"Sezer"Hands

    Edward"Sezer"Hands Elite Member

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  5. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Ill Tezer.

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    Snew - Thats some of the best ive seen from you. Nice.
     
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  6. .HATESONE.

    .HATESONE. Banned

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    iu like the top one.the bottom ones o looks off and a little to small.
     
  7. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    The paper was bendin up on that corner so its looks a little distorted, but I know what youre saying. Not a big fan of Os myself.
     
  8. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    that last snew pops off the paper dope man
    the kame is nice for a large ass roller or bigass bomb the O fucks it up imo
    the upper kameo is really clean trough
     
  9. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    okay anothere attempt on efame just some quickies

    ai40.tinypic.com_24fb9rr.jpg
    pen freestyle at an boring presentation at work it came out quite nice so i glued in my book
    ai42.tinypic.com_2h83hgi.jpg another bigbombfreestyle crap thang

    funkadelic the oldskool ceve style
    ai41.tinypic.com_dyol89.jpg

    and another thing crazy fill in my other book
    ai41.tinypic.com_20hx7o2.jpg
     
  10. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    3d on r is off jajaja
     
  11. Snew

    Snew Senior Member

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    diggin em all zase..
     
  12. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    Zase
    Drake
    And Tezer
    all take the cake of dopeness
     
  13. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    Gravity (I messed up the V and T)

    [Broken External Image]:http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6301/dsc01854cx1.jpg

    Crits
    Zase- I'm feeling the last two. Especially the simple 'funkadelic'.
    Kameo- It's pretty solid looking for the style.
    Tezer- You got the letters but the drips and coloring throw me off.
    Sike- Remember to do the simples. We talked about this.
     
  14. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    okay ai39.tinypic.com_mtlfgm.jpg
    this one looks quite nice if you take like 5-6 steps back from ur screen lol

    hahaah just bombing practise for a while im sick of the concentrated full colours
    but that will be over tomorrow cuz i cant stop

    eskimo the letters are all good its nog that the v i is bad
    its just the way u pump them into eachother end then give extentions
    try some cleaner letters and then fill up dead space with those extentions u feel me?
    those letters are like mexicans on a boat to amerika there is liek wtf zomg no space O,o

    heheh that cake tasted well
    good luck eskimo ma man ur doing dope stuff
     
  15. Squibsorz

    Squibsorz Senior Member

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    ai41.tinypic.com_20hx7o2.jpg

    the top one is so badass
     
  16. NouveauP

    NouveauP Elite Member

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    Posted this in the Characters thread, but got no crits. Not an original, just working on character forms and inking.

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  17. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    Yeah man I just have a problem with empty space. I'll try spacing out next time.
     
  18. Blox

    Blox Senior Member

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    That gravity is SICK
     
  19. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    how so? i agree the A does but what else does?
     
  20. Germer

    Germer Senior Member

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    Alright Im takin a chance here posting this because of how shit it is but i realize that i dont really give a fuck if the toy forum on bombingscience doesn't like it. Im thinking that this throw could be alot better but im not trusting my own opinion because im desperate for a decent bomb. so crit away, and trust me, i know whos opinion counts by checkin the stuff they post. (Note, done FAST on the computer.)

    ill crit the other stuff later.