Didnt come out tht good the white paintmarker i used jus giot soaked into the the aper n smugged i was pissed but critz? not one of my bests =/ Opt nice shit man Snew - very easy to read, creative, fukn golden =D fresh shit Drake - id change ur d an move ur D n R closer together
say- lose the arrows.. keep workin with those bars.. it looks like you kind of understand it.. opte- i cant read the first letter at all.. clean up your bars a bit and lose a few of those extensions drake- i really dig that throw.. theres a dude around here who has a style like that.the seond d looks better.. soath- keep your bars the same width- your 3d is way off.. and looks like you did a 3d in some places and a dropshadow in others.. other than that just keep hittin the books.. any more crits from above?
The paper was bendin up on that corner so its looks a little distorted, but I know what youre saying. Not a big fan of Os myself.
that last snew pops off the paper dope man the kame is nice for a large ass roller or bigass bomb the O fucks it up imo the upper kameo is really clean trough
okay anothere attempt on efame just some quickies pen freestyle at an boring presentation at work it came out quite nice so i glued in my book another bigbombfreestyle crap thang funkadelic the oldskool ceve style and another thing crazy fill in my other book
Gravity (I messed up the V and T) [Broken External Image]:http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/6301/dsc01854cx1.jpg Crits Zase- I'm feeling the last two. Especially the simple 'funkadelic'. Kameo- It's pretty solid looking for the style. Tezer- You got the letters but the drips and coloring throw me off. Sike- Remember to do the simples. We talked about this.
okay this one looks quite nice if you take like 5-6 steps back from ur screen lol hahaah just bombing practise for a while im sick of the concentrated full colours but that will be over tomorrow cuz i cant stop eskimo the letters are all good its nog that the v i is bad its just the way u pump them into eachother end then give extentions try some cleaner letters and then fill up dead space with those extentions u feel me? those letters are like mexicans on a boat to amerika there is liek wtf zomg no space O,o heheh that cake tasted well good luck eskimo ma man ur doing dope stuff
Posted this in the Characters thread, but got no crits. Not an original, just working on character forms and inking.
Alright Im takin a chance here posting this because of how shit it is but i realize that i dont really give a fuck if the toy forum on bombingscience doesn't like it. Im thinking that this throw could be alot better but im not trusting my own opinion because im desperate for a decent bomb. so crit away, and trust me, i know whos opinion counts by checkin the stuff they post. (Note, done FAST on the computer.) ill crit the other stuff later.