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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    Germ- It looks pretty cool aside from it being with the mouse. I would either make the top of bottom of the g much fatter.
     
  2. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    if your guna do somethin like that you should make your M smaller or the rest of your letters as fat as the m. other then that its decent. i duno if its intentional but make the back of the g as big as the e.
     
  3. Germer

    Germer Senior Member

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    Thank you for that ACTUALLY helpful piece of information. Im planning on doing a nicer version later on today. Also it was on the trackpad of my laptop, not even a mouse haha.
     
  4. Germer

    Germer Senior Member

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    ai357.photobucket.com_albums_oo15_NerseOne_throwie1.jpg

    lol i used my old scanner and had already forgotten how to use it. just know that your looking at the back of the paper flipped horizontally haha. lovin that bleedthrough

    the main problem is the e that is too far behind the g.
     
  5. blunttokes

    blunttokes Elite Member

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  6. RhodeIsland

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  7. Germer

    Germer Senior Member

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    snew - i can tell that you can draw pretty well, but practise your handy beofre all this shit, because youll regret it later.
    beatjunky - until you get rid of arrows like those, you wont improve. trust me you want ot improve.
    opte - make sure that with that style, your letters stay the same height. also, dont worry about fills like that now, but get going on some really nice letters, because i can tell you can come up with them.
    drake - really i shouldnt say anything about your name but its really not as cool as you think. drake is just one of those names that are kinda gay. whatever, you like it thats cool. squish up those letters, make them thinner and closer together. and yes, you actually improved the d on the second one.
    masta t - do the keyboard letters eeryones talkin about. practise the handstyle, and fix the 3d as soon as you get the letters done.
    tezer - best of the last few pages no doubt. we both know that its a NICE style. the only thing is the z. i have the same problem with keeping the bar width the same in my s's and z's, but i got used to it and now im a lot better. nice colors/fill.
    kameo - your following the right steps to a good style of your own.
    zase - get rid of rick's arrows, too much detail in the bubbles and fill etc. also, keep all the letters at complementary heights. the first piece on the last pic is GREAT.
    and finally eskimo - i can see that your very talented, and a few months ago i would have said the style was perfect. sadly i grew out of that whole thing, and now it just seems alright. youll also grow out of it, even though its so nice to look at now.

    ^^look at all those crits :O
     
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  8. bak

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  9. GIzUrD

    GIzUrD Senior Member

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    oh shit!
     
  10. Germer

    Germer Senior Member

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  11. pandemik

    pandemik Senior Member

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  13. Germer

    Germer Senior Member

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    lol haha trackpad>posable thumbs.
    montreal, why? pm me ifyou are too.
     
  14. pandemik

    pandemik Senior Member

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    well uhhh maybe you could give advice rather than just say atrocious...
     
  15. .HATESONE.

    .HATESONE. Banned

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    not finished but i owe kansr for that thing he did for me...also i fucked up a bit but ill fix it later with the back ground or the drop or something.basicly becuase i havent posted in ages.
    ai42.tinypic.com_k4t2dv.gif
    CRITS?COMMENTS? i know it needs to be cleaned up but i like hearing form you guys:) haah.


    edit.whatever im tired of resizing that damn thing...fuck you image shack....
     
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  16. acereborn

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  17. pandemik

    pandemik Senior Member

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    uhhh, i thought I had a decent throw up, but i just realized it looks not so great.

    this is really frustrating.
     
  18. .HATESONE.

    .HATESONE. Banned

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    bottom page bumpss.
     
  19. cerex89

    cerex89 Senior Member

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  20. numberonestunna

    numberonestunna Senior Member

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    Hatesone - those letters are pretty tight. i would just get rid of the little points in the crotch of the K.
    cerex - the T is alright but im really not feeling the rest of the letters and the peice as a whole.. your 3d is a little messed up - it is on the bottom some letters and left/bottom on others. keep workin. try straight letters.