tell me wat u think

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go WAYYYY more simplar

 

what do you think?


something i did in 10 minutes or so, p.s. i know its lined paper i am a toy

 

joker wat do you mean by simplar like less collor ??

 

He mean you are trying way tooo Hard. Look at the New to Graff Thread.

 

he means stop posting that wack shit go simpler as in no color and letters you see on your keyboard

 

ive been doing graff for like 6 months . my teachers through out all my black books ill post some of my none pieces i guess.

 

bump cause its cool

 

what?? and if you call those things pieces please do all of our eyes a favor and dont post anything unless its real simple reeeeaaaaalll simple

 

lol nice Sike

 

they threw them out? wtf where you doing letting them touch your things.stop being a pussy and pop that bitch.

 

yurp
kares. work on your s, and r
sasasassss rex, you suck. go to new to graffiti forums
i like to write 123, you suck. go to new to graffiti forums
zase, your s and r, the bars, they start to get bigger. and i don't mean the flow.
germer, your hand is cool. your simples, i can't read. muff plunge?

if so the m is wierd as fuck, need more letter definition. and the m and u connection. there should be more black so there is no question what the letters are.

 

sorry to bump again, but i want some crits, it says spun..
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i really like it havek. i feel like u gotta extend the last bar of the N a little lower and maybe a little fatter. idk its the only letter that takes a little bit to make out. but your style is the illest im really really feelin it

 

yeah i would like some criticism too plex, i really want to be better and racking a black book this weekend so no more lines

 

i would say sass to make your letters the same style and same size, keep workin on simples but try to make it flow a lil better.. keep tryin tho man.

 

spun:need to make it more simple with the arrows

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first simp with my new name, what do you guys think?

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awaker - give crits to get them from now on, make it simpler, loose the drips, fatten up your letters, make your letters simpler

kares - work on your E

kan - looks good try an uppercase A maybe

iliketowrite - new to graff thread

 

HATES and/or LICKS

if either one of you are reading thiz lets exchange.


oh yeah i just dont know what you write, hates.