keep your bars the same size, go a little simpler dont worry about fills jsut yet pay attention to letters
sine-make all your letters the sam thickness urmom-i like it but i'm not sure whatit says :S hate me: View attachment 456649
$IN30NE- give crits to get em son... and go simple for now resp- i have a hard time telling apart ur main bars from extension, therfore making it hard to read... try making the main bars bigger and stand out more it says SUEZ, and yea the handy is pretty bad lol, normally i write SEWZ
haha u guys are a bunch of fags!! I HAVE dont graff for 3 years (with long on and off breaks) sure its not my thing, but I do it for fun... and when it comes to any other element in hip hop except breaking I WILL EAT YOUR FOOD! haha what the fuck u think ive been doing dumbass I freestyle on a dialy basis, enter battles all the time, and play shows.. in fact im openin up for D12 this april and battling at North By North East festival in June for $500 so you can suck my dick!! i hope u become successfull on bombing science forums u fucking pathetic loser
kid stfu already, you suck at graff shit happens sit the fuck down and work at getting better or get the fuck out and keep rapping
ToPhat- first off, ur on this forum too so if we are losers by being on it, then so are you... ive been writing since june so i dont see how u after 3 years are still producing that kind of work and even if u are, thats okay, not everyone is a wiz at it, juss dont talk so much shit on here, comprende?
yeah youll go far with that kind of additude. specially in rap, i hope you get popped for that big moulth of yours nah nah let me guess, youve already been shot like 4 times and that shit aint shit right? you aint shit homie, step the fuck off
im trying not to spam ur forum by posting shit talking instead of pics..... so stop provolking me BS Police cuz ill herb u out
i dont give a fuck this is the toy forum and were allowed to talk as much as we want here. i post pics here on the reg and peeps know who i am. Now YOU, you aint shiiitttttt
WHAT IS LOOOOOOVE? [Broken External Image]:http://fc39.deviantart.com/fs42/f/2009/062/9/f/What_is_Love__by_Rhino_fish.jpg Boges- Flows well but the balance is a bit off. If you separated the two bars that are kind of jagged on the B it would be ill. Resp- I'm not going to criticize the style (we need more unique styles like that these days) but the only advice I can give is to make a few of the bars a bit straighter. SinOne- Do your simples. Suez/Urmom- It looks pretty cool. Just try to clean it up a bit.
tophat of a pussy shut the fuck up your not hard your graff is shit and if you think soo low of this forum dont post you getting all hurt off words you read on the internet from people you have never seen and prolly never will... fucking idiots l0l
Ummmmm......Your Postin in the Toy Thread.... That All Im going to say and Im going to leave it at that. You guys get my point