thats a really dope idea for a fill. but ur bars need a little work. Heres a VERY old sketch, i just filled in last night. donthate View attachment 457039
You talking about my bars? Seem fine to me, but speaking of bars Sone you need to hit the simples with basic bars. Get rid of the arrows and simplify.
Whoa bud, yeh im taslking about your bars, with eh random little extension on the super skinny top. And this was an incredibly old sketch finally colored.
Top extension is a common extension to the A, and it connects to the Middle bar to the Legs of an A. By the way your arrows are coming out of random places, and how about that looped extension on your O.
Im just giving crits here. yeh its a common extension, but its usually done well. Your bars are too skinny at the top, and it doesnt follow a line through the centre of the A. and for the 3rd time, i know the sketch is bunk, its like 2 years old. JUST filled.
If you haven't noticed that's the style im going for, i like my bars skinner at the top and thicker at the bottom. Also the extension follows correctly, just follow the angle it's going. By the way your fill is wack. Keep a consistent gradient, like blue at top and green at the bottom part of the letters, plus keep your strokes path as consistent as possible. When doing 1 point 3d like that i like to make my strokes go towards the point, don't do any horizontal shit.
The 3d does go into a point. u can see see the point on the page, but its a little wonk i know. why? 2 years old. and that may be the styleu were goin for, but thats an ungly way of doin it. the fill, was just a fuck around. and it doesnt have to just say one colour on top, one on bottom...
thrice should just stop arguing his point with that a.i agree with sone the idea for the fill is dope but the letters leave more to be desired(i think thats the expression im going for) basicly it needs work and sone burns you so yeah.....dont argue just go with it...
Okay...here the F is fixed ... I dont know yet those extensions. What do you think? View attachment 457051
f is still a lil funky in my opinion.better than the last tho definitely.for me its that second bar on it.i would make it longer probably..but thats just me.
big blue, that ms throw is poppin proof, im likin yo shit, its dope thrice, that a is dece, but i mean i think the bars should be wider, air it out, if you get whaty im sayin, well the saying is "give crits to get crits" and i gave some, so now crit me [Broken External Image]:http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/8858/scan0001otj.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/7641/scan0002xtb.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/scan0002xtb.jpg/1/w640.png
i like the r on the second one.but what up with the arrow?im guessing to kill the extra space huh? haha. work on your writes(tags) lerch. that would be my first priority...
Im not trying to start shit or whatever but im not going to take crit about my bars from a guy who pulls this out of his ass, he definitely doesn't burn me, how about we do this a battle. What do you guys think?? If anything i burn him This shit VS this