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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. klic

    klic Elite Member

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  2. Apocalypse

    Apocalypse Senior Member

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    beeen tryyyin..

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    Crits?

    Mer-getting better, still though keeeeeep it more and more keyboard like..

    provin-eww, awful e, and m, and bottom of the s...

    janek-getting much better, still though the bottom of the K is what's killing you duder...
     
  3. Kaiser71

    Kaiser71 Senior Member

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    I like it A LOT more than your previous one, I like how you put your handy and tag into the crevices instead of in the fill.

    To be honest, I feel like I can only draw so many block letters/Keyboards before it stops helping me. You can only progress so much drawing the same plain letters.
     
  4. Zase

    Zase Senior Member

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    mer you do get it i like it
    dont be afraid to variate with bar thickness aslong as it is symetric
    just swing those bars like crazy and break them off later at the same height
    all the same way so you will create style
     
  5. Kaiser71

    Kaiser71 Senior Member

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    Thanks Zase. No sarcasm intended, some of the most useful advice I've gotten so far. The only part I'm not sure I understand is the "breaking off bars at the same height all the same way"?
     
  6. provinT13

    provinT13 Senior Member

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    Please ignore the big ass bottom of the S and the line through the E

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    This makes me hate writing, it's so frusturating when I can't sketch for shit and thus can't go get up. :(
     
  7. Zarb

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  8. gash77

    gash77 Senior Member

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    Zarb- You should use bars with the A and the S
    War- I would go more simple, but I like how you put your tag in the crevices as said by kaiser, it looks nice.
    Mes- I would work more on the e.

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    The coloured 2 are old ones.
     
  9. provinT13

    provinT13 Senior Member

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    Lines are really shakey because I was writing with pen on my table so I was hitting a bunch of bumps, but i'll try and pratice tonight in my book.

    gash77 The last one is sick.
     
  10. Hyphy

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  11. provinT13

    provinT13 Senior Member

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    Bring the letters together and start to bend them
     
  12. noisyburglar

    noisyburglar Member

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    ohhh baby, ok, your gonna want to start changing the shape of the letters now, keep everything symetrical still though, change the ends from flat things to i dunno, bite something for that, and move them closer
     
  13. WoeInfinite

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    ai60.photobucket.com_albums_h26_SoopaxVillain_0318092056.jpg ai60.photobucket.com_albums_h26_SoopaxVillain_downsized_0318092058.jpg ai60.photobucket.com_albums_h26_SoopaxVillain_0318092059.jpg ai60.photobucket.com_albums_h26_SoopaxVillain_0318092101.jpg
    finally got a new blackbook.
    callin it How To Suck At Graff Vol.1
    all that random shit is in the back cover, cuz i didnt bother to notice i opened it backwards
    =_______________________________=
     
  14. sallybsk

    sallybsk Senior Member

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    read the new to graff thread. and the first couple pages of it.
    actually read.
    AND YOU CAN DO SIMPLES FOR A LONG FUCKING TIME. YOU DON'T NEED TO PIECE. jesus christ.
    like look at the post above mine, that's a simple in the Silver, but it's not exactly like keyboard letters. Please start your change LIGHTLY(don't try to bend bars crazy as fck your first time). but you really aren't going to be doing pieces like you see that soon, it really does take a long time :( i'm sorry. but the more you practice, the maybe faster it will go. I just see too many toys getting ahead of themselves, and the sad thing is that they know about bars and whatnot.
     
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  15. Hyphy

    Hyphy Senior Member

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  16. Aesir

    Aesir Senior Member

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    Move your letters closer
     
  17. KnoxIn

    KnoxIn Senior Member

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    here are some flicks, the second one the E looks like shit i know and the first one just workin on my A's i know the second A is probably too pointy like always guess its just a habit

    crits???

    steh- im likin those ones in pencil one second one in pecil seems like its too streched out but other than that nice work
    zarb- dont really like that S in the middle the bottom little extension throws it off
    war- im diggin it only thing is maybe make your bars a little fatter i dunno just a idea
    mer- im hella diggin that one it looks hella more clean that your previous work nice job
    klic- im likin that for the most part the proportions on the J is pretty off but still its on a napkin and looks pretty clean
     
  18. sallybsk

    sallybsk Senior Member

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    you fail
    keyboard letters now.
    now.
    NAO!
    I'm sorry for being mean sir...
    but really, you're getting ahead of yourself.
     
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  19. provinT13

    provinT13 Senior Member

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    yea hyphy Just bring them closer and layer them.
     
  20. Graff J up

    Graff J up Senior Member

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    critss??

    woe i like that woe peice but make the E bigger
    faze *EDIT* its alright but i dont like how u make the a smaller and fix up that e

    sorry for the crappy ass picture i only had my phone at the moment

    sake- i would work on the s and k i dont realy like how its all wiggly if u can say that lol
     
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