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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
nah its a completely different sketch
knox - sickk, way above my level, so i dont feel good about criticizing anything of it. lol. im still a toy
daylo - maybe try different styles of d's. i kinda like the first one. idk why.
viruz - above my level too, but i think that e at the end should be a lil bigger, it seems smaller than the rest of the other letters.
just trying with some simples here. is this one any good? so far its just "el", but imma add "che" after it.
thanks for the crits, yea i liked the first one better too, but other people said they couldnt tell it was a d.
A piece I'm working on. I'll probably go back and make that bottom E bar not turn up.
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And an Uma Thurman I'm about halfway through with.
jaep-thats lookin really nice, cant wait to see it painted.
they are different sketches with bits and connections and shit but your letter structure is exactly the same.
try for example a more "squarey" R or a round Y, just change them around all the time.
Sellers i like that d better and also like when you put the center of the o past the l not on top of it it makes it easier to make out the letter. Does that make sense?
im forming my letters from simples... its just the style im trying to form
first D looks better in my opinion
Ziex thats nice, but your letters are very much the same every time, except the last sketch i think that had really nice different letter.
so try adding extentions to the z and x or just try build them differently.
side- i like the second one. but dont get that blue polka dot junk haha, well atleast yours is inked/color
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crits. it says wise, sorry I didn't ink, don't have that much time to draw anymore =[
crimate cant see your flic its too light
cnt read da 1st letta
RI:i know what you write so i can read it but it is kinda hard to see what the first letter is..with the H havin 2 different parts it makes the second half of the H look like a lower case t...connect the 2 somehow and its nasty
yea bro i agree wit lizard but da shyts styll fresh
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