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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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    nah its a completely different sketch
     
  2. [MiTH] hovz

    [MiTH] hovz Senior Member

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    knox - sickk, way above my level, so i dont feel good about criticizing anything of it. lol. im still a toy

    daylo - maybe try different styles of d's. i kinda like the first one. idk why.

    viruz - above my level too, but i think that e at the end should be a lil bigger, it seems smaller than the rest of the other letters.

    just trying with some simples here. is this one any good? so far its just "el", but imma add "che" after it.
     

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  3. sellers E.

    sellers E. Senior Member

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    thanks for the crits, yea i liked the first one better too, but other people said they couldnt tell it was a d.
     
  4. NouveauP

    NouveauP Elite Member

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  5. sellers E.

    sellers E. Senior Member

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    jaep-thats lookin really nice, cant wait to see it painted.
     
  6. Sketched!

    Sketched! Senior Member

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    they are different sketches with bits and connections and shit but your letter structure is exactly the same.
    try for example a more "squarey" R or a round Y, just change them around all the time.
     
  7. tbonebailey2711

    tbonebailey2711 Senior Member

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    Sellers i like that d better and also like when you put the center of the o past the l not on top of it it makes it easier to make out the letter. Does that make sense?
     
  8. Stussy

    Stussy Senior Member

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    im forming my letters from simples... its just the style im trying to form
     
  9. jupsick

    jupsick Senior Member

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    first D looks better in my opinion
    afarm4.static.flickr.com_3485_3465850390_24196d0f70_o.jpg
    crits?
     
  10. Sketched!

    Sketched! Senior Member

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    Ziex thats nice, but your letters are very much the same every time, except the last sketch i think that had really nice different letter.
    so try adding extentions to the z and x or just try build them differently.

    afarm4.static.flickr.com_3081_3463483724_2464f4162a.png
    afarm4.static.flickr.com_3604_3463483272_4a9a1e8a04.png
     
  11. Sketched!

    Sketched! Senior Member

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    DP
     
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  12. crimateNC

    crimateNC Senior Member

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    side- i like the second one. but dont get that blue polka dot junk haha, well atleast yours is inked/color
    [Broken External Image]:http://usera.imagecave.com/teaguesy/124130.jpg
    crits. it says wise, sorry I didn't ink, don't have that much time to draw anymore =[
     
  13. crimateNC

    crimateNC Senior Member

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    fuck.
     
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  14. tbonebailey2711

    tbonebailey2711 Senior Member

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    crimate cant see your flic its too light
     
  15. sellers E.

    sellers E. Senior Member

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    yes.
     
  16. RhodeIsland

    RhodeIsland Elite Member

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  17. MASE P_2s

    MASE P_2s Senior Member

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    cnt read da 1st letta
     
  18. RhodeIsland

    RhodeIsland Elite Member

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  19. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    RI:i know what you write so i can read it but it is kinda hard to see what the first letter is..with the H havin 2 different parts it makes the second half of the H look like a lower case t...connect the 2 somehow and its nasty
     
  20. MASE P_2s

    MASE P_2s Senior Member

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    yea bro i agree wit lizard but da shyts styll fresh