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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
He did connect it when he inked it,
It's just hard to tell because the pencil/pen
Pen i cant use pencil
i see it now.. if the piece was bigger it would be easier to tell...either way that style is dope
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bump for crits..
livin is dope
new name maybe
shaken- looks pretty good.
few throws i did in class.
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lookin good maker but i would fix up that E
and daylo idk i just dont really dig throws but thats just me...
edit- which one do you think looks better?
Shit never comes out how I wanted it, but you guys get the idea.
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so its kinda like my other one i hate how i like shaded it with my pen but still
ahem- im diggin it the only thing is the top of the E seems unproportioned
graff J- i like the one on the far left the best
scino- that top one is pretty dope i dunno about the bottom one though it just looks weird to me
Ahem - I like it, but I'd like it more with color.
Knox - It doesn't look finished to me, but I like the variation of style. Make it 3D and it might look better.
Neaz - I like the bottom left one the best. I can't read the A on one of them.
Sellers - Good fatty bubbles.
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fury, throw that away and draw the letters on your keyboard
knoxin, don't know what you were trying to do, but it doesn't look very good, simples
ahem, looks good, work on that E though
daylo, i've been seeing basically the same thing from you over and over again, take some time off from posting and just sketch for a while, then post again for crits
here's some wackness, hate the u and the d, gotta work on that shit...
Bigdream - Digging the 3D a lot, and I like how the letters look
This look any better?
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Bump for crits.
Fury- go simple simple simple. You need to learn solid line work before you do anything special. Maybe even just work on handstyles right now. If not that, extremely simple block letters with solid bars.
Lusid- I'm really not feeling the style, but the sketch itself isn't bad. The only thing that I can definitely tell is off of the 3-d on the right bar of the 'U'
Nouveaup - I like the color choice and how it's floating above the ground. The white looks good too. I'm just not feeling the block-stacking thing.
Also, are you referring to my original post, or the more up-to-date one?
fury dont let your 3-d go over your letters if that makes sense look at how ahem did it its a perfect example
Knox - Yeah I understand what you mean. I've done both in the past, and I'm just trying to find which I've liked better. I'll do one and post it.
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