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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Dr. Fisher

    Dr. Fisher Member

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  2. ding1

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  3. MyNameIsMAX

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    critics please i gave em, id like some back please.
     
  4. Shurik*n

    Shurik*n Senior Member

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    ...we have been
     
  5. diggitydoggz

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    this doesn't apply to you (the guy who just asked for crits) but for anyone who is putting up pics without giving crits, GIVE CRITS TO GET THEM, this forum isn't just for people to help you it's for you to help us too. no matter how noob you are you can always offer something of value.
     
  6. KRE1

    KRE1 Guest

    stop all your fucking complaining and just DO.

    ur fuckin lucky u guys even GET crits.
     
  7. bak

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    pila nice and flan looks great

    fish great concept i like the name

    city the backround is cool but idk about the letters atleast go bigger with them because it looks awkward

    i would say quick piece but i've been working on it off and on
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  9. bak

    bak Senior Member

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    yeah thanks i re did it but the u is always a lil bitch to me haha but im working on it
     
  10. OctoVenom

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  11. MyNameIsMAX

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    View attachment 485992
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    I drew these up before i seen this post looks alot better not sure about the S on the second one. :confused:
     
  12. MyNameIsMAX

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    OctoVenom i like the second pic, the can in the back pretty sick i donno about the wings though. lookin pretty sick
     
  13. VaNdAL xBA!x

    VaNdAL xBA!x Banned

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    ding thats a nice simple right there.....all u other kids needa do tha same
     
  14. funhouseXcast

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    chuy- nice lettering, color hurts my eyes, but in a way i think thats a cool thing
    cyber- first peice is my nice, but i might make the bottom line on the "E" a little thicker, second peice, might wanna work on your wings but i like the idea
    macs- nice simps, on the second peice, try to keep your drips straight.
     
  15. KRE1

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    cyber im not feeling that B at allllll but i do like where ur going with ur work ...

    macs diggin tha simps. i dont kno about that extension u dropped down on tha M in tha first flick ... could b construed as a H. i would tighten errything up in tha second flick and def work on that S
     
  16. bak

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    yeah that can is fresh and macs that red one is good work with that

    and yeah dude i fucked up with the red prisma it wasnt suppose to be that dark =[
     
  17. bak

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    yeah that can is fresh and macs that red one is good work with that

    and yeah dude i fucked up with the red prisma it wasnt suppose to be that dark =[
     
  18. gash77

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    Crits:
    Macs- For the the red one fix the M a lil cause it kinda looks like an H. For the blue one I'd remove the bubbles and drips just for now.
    Cyber- I like those accept the middle one, its hard to tell that the 3rd letter is a B. And on the 3rd peice I'd remove the extension coming from the top of the R. Those colours are also really nicee.
    Chuy- Lookin good, not much for the colours though. And your 3D is kinda weird on the C.
    Krep- Good simple, but Id make the top bar of the E more straight.

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  19. KnoxIn

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    Hey anyone want to do a exchange im tryin to get a variety in my style so i gotta try different letters pm me if your down
     
  20. Church

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    I'm really like the colors you used on that, they are sort of unusual. Interesting letter setup also.