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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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    ai166.photobucket.com_albums_u86_ShAm33_Photo13.jpg

    Shit me aint bin on this site in years! Peg stick to the simples.
    where is all the old people, ras, revolt, sketch, trash, blazer?
     
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  2. -ShAmEE-

    -ShAmEE- Elite Member

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  3. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    the S is good.
    for the M, if you have the bars in your P and A bending outward, don't make the M bend inward. it looks weird. try and get a simple style of letters that flows BEFORE you start adding extensions. then you won't have to worry.
     
  4. Scream Out

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    lol, ive seen your shit around spam
    not too bad of a hand
     
  5. PegCityBoy

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    thanks i've been keepin it in the books for the past while cept for a couple chill spots to practice and the odd hand here and there
     
  6. Divine89

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  8. StayHyE

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    some scrap markers tryin to get down some structure... crits?
     
  9. -Empty-Can-

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    Brand new style. First time I tried it. I fucked up on the inside of them O. i'm still not sure what i'm gonna do with that. And the S looks kinda out of place without a bar at the bottom

    Crits
     
  10. -Empty-Can-

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    sorry for double post my computer fucked up.

    i might as well just give some crits.

    stayhye - the D looks kinda out of place because its rounded out when the other letters are more block like. maybe mayke the front of the D a little straighter

    divine89 - i like it. it has a nice flow to it.

    halfgangstashit - like i said before i love the details on the inside that make it look like its popping out.

    pegcityboy - lose the bar on the bottom of the P or make it a little bit shorter. Same with the bar on the bottom of the M
     
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  11. SEEP

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  12. StayHyE

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    letters are too far apart
     
  13. SEEP

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  14. ThatguywhodrinksTea

    ThatguywhodrinksTea Senior Member

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    i know the O is shaky because the marker shifted

    seep lame man dont ask for that.. your on your way keep at it :D
     
  15. ThatguywhodrinksTea

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  17. gumOnShoe

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  18. funhouseXcast

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    well. where to start.

    spam that shit's clean, all your bars look good. S doesn't really fit in. I think you should try a little overlap though.

    kingdom hearts the whole thing has a nice flow, but all of the letter individually are pretty ugly. go simpler, with less attachment bars.

    knar (hgs) i like that slap, except the face is not even remotly similar to an A. and i know you write knar. not kn(vowel face)r

    Dlae work on keeping your bars the same width. and take your time on the fill or it looks like shit.

    stotwhat the fuck. simpler.

    and finally seep you are listening to the almighty forum by starting simple. *virtual high five* If you keep putting work in you'll pass everybody you see in no time. but stay simple for now, I'll do your name for you and submit it later.

    now me. destroy it. tear me apart. make me do it better.
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  19. gumOnShoe

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    now me. destroy it. tear me apart. make me do it better.
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    it's dope in my book, but try to bring the t up, rather than slanting it to the left.

    now crit mine. ;)
     
  20. SEEP

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    dope man, thanks a ton, looking forward to it.