Honestly, I can't read it with the blue stuff. And the left leg of the K looks too thin.

 

Rather

Yeah id rather have crits on this instead of the other, this ones bars are more even....so plz crit this, instead of that^.

 

Go simpler, lose that extension on the B and the L, make them straight. That B could use work too.

 

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I haven't drawn anything colored in a looong time.

Fathem- Pretty much exactly what Fury said. And your 3D needs work.
sinkilla1- Can't read it at all

 

empty can, thats actually pretty cool to look at!
simple but good colors...just make yoour clouds look puffier, like of better word.

btw heres my finished piece

 

Busted. Biter.

 

^ Consistent letter sizing would help it a lot.
Also, I'm not feeling the fill at all

Edit: holy balls didn't see the bite

 

Bafl-Fix the middle of the B, The letters look flimsy, I think some where there needs to be like some solid structure to balance out some of the jelly, but hey its clean.

Stot- clean fo sho, I don't like the middle of the T's how they all skinny, overall kinda boxy for me.

I'm havin trouble making clean blends with sharpies.
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i was trying to find that picture so i could post it up, i saw it a while back and loved it.

i know i copied most of it but i threw in my e and o

 

What a piece of garbage to bite too, eh?

 

Well in the original piece its an "M" and a "W"...

and I'd have to say the original needs some work on structure.
Can control is amazing though

 

i was just lookkin for inspiration, i wasnt meaning to bite so bad.

sorry guys! i made it seem like i made it up, shoulda posted the real before mine.

btw mister w .com has some really cool graffiti, i love his style

 

Stot, don't worry about 3D or coloring, just work on your letters. And go simpler.

 

Neon, don't even try to make excuses for that. It's a straight up and down bite. No where near "inspired by".

 

Mr. W as in mr. wiggles?
As in Graffiticreator?

GTFO.

 

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@slek man that is sick colors with sharpies for sure
idk I'm not feeling the K
and let the L breathe a little, don't cover it so much with the S

aaaannndd simple
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tear me a new one plz

 

Dig ya stylee Prane

 

stot try making ur shit the same size... and practice making ur lines straight... and bars straight.

bafl that ish is def not my style iono man i think if you was trying to slap that on a wall it would get lined over in like 5 seconds