M3KA1!- I cant really read it, I cant see a flow either, not hating its just my opinion. Mellowdrone- I cant read the first and the second ones, but the last kez needs proportion. Stuck-You missed the 3-d on the R Black to the future- You could really do more if your doing 3 letters. Make them go together more, They look like 3 seperate letters not really a name, the s if bending to the left really far, The A is in the middle and the F is just there. Still working with a new style
SQ are squished. Mellow - Go simpler, I can't read anything. Mekai - Go simpler also, but you have more basic shit.
Squint I like it. That's one of your better S but it covers the Q too much. Maybe you could make the U exactly like that upside down N
^ It's a little bit better, but just do the keys on your keyboard and lose all the extensions and stuff. I can't tell when a line ends a letter. Crus - Good as usual.
i thought it flowed pretty well... i guess more practice though. ive gotten way better in the past month though, so thats good.
i wasnt talkin bout him. im talkin bout mine. everyone said stick to simples. i got simples down. honestly yea mellow you need to take it down to simples. work on bar structure and such
nah, i thought that too and i stuck to them and it really cleaned some shit up, idk it made my shit look better. yet it's still not where i want it pix for talking i like the S in mine yet i hate how everything turned out View attachment 535999 weakfingers: im liking. Crus: i said something in intermediate Ocean, bars.
ocean do simples. squint the char throws me off IMO safer i like it, but not the f. View attachment 536004 rough sketch. any crits before i start to fill in my pieces? also ik, 3ds off on the bottom of the s.