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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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  2. Zookyook

    Zookyook Elite Member

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    i like ur progress roes... try using a vanishing point like black said, even though u dont HAVE TO it always looks better... color them shits too! steal markers from children lol
     
  3. M3KA1!

    M3KA1! Elite Member

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    crayons dude. be a gangsta and use crayons
     
  4. -Empty-Can-

    -Empty-Can- Elite Member

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    Why would you use a vanishing point for a side-ways 3D?
     
  5. M3KA1!

    M3KA1! Elite Member

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    i take that back. black i do dig yer simples but after awhile you gotta progress. so just keep on movin up slowly. you'll get it. tweak yer 'f' a lil. it seems a lil off. maybe its just me. stay up. oh and yer handys aint half bad either
     
  6. Th3t4

    Th3t4 Senior Member

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    this isn't really graffiti but it's for a tattoo
    this will become an ambigram (a word that reads the same both ways up)
    so I only have to draw 2 characters to cover the whole word, the F/e and r/e
    it should read "free". and no, I did not choose the word.
    i flipped the letters and put them next to the unflipped so you can see how it would read.
    crits welcome
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  7. Patchy

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  8. b SQUARED 08

    b SQUARED 08 Senior Member

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    Roes: Your E needs some tweaking, but overall it looks pretty good. Just keep runnin' through simps and practicing making clean lines and you'll be good in no-time.
    Safer: Your S and A have pretty good flow together, but your F, E, and R throw it off. Your R isn't too bad, so I wouldn't scrap it, but your F and E need a lot of work. I'd develop on that though for sure.
    SLM: Read the New To Graffiti Thread and start using bars for your letters. Read the thread and you'll know what I mean.

    Tonight's efforts (as it says, disregard the handies- I know they suck, lol):
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  9. Patchy

    Patchy Senior Member

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    squared thanks for the tips but ive tried it, but i have trouble with the "s" i dont like boxy can you give me an example on how to use boxs with an s
     
  10. RADAWG

    RADAWG Senior Member

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    ai207.photobucket.com_albums_bb33_skateboard23_0109100133.jpg
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    Anybody have any criticism on the simple? I usually just bomb but I wanna start really trying simples and shit
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    Asker- I am loving that bro
    Patchy- Work on just doing simple keyboard letters and use bars.
     
  11. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Asker - Don't have two line-weights on the S, and I stand by everything I've ever told you.
    SLM - New to graff thread.
    Roes - I literally said out loud "Damn that ***** got hella better." Keep at it, and I dig that E. Push your letters closer together and don't forget to work on hands. Other than that, good job.
     
  12. Patchy

    Patchy Senior Member

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    Fury are you saying my work has no potential what do i need to work on
     
  13. cow

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    crits or w/e boredomkills


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  14. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    All of your letters basically. Your M looks bad, and so do the rest. Basically, copy keyboard letters and use bars. This way, all of your letters will be proportional.

    Kow - I don't understand your first sentence, but give crits. I don't like the character, and all your letters look whack, in my opinion. Actually the last O and W look good.
     
  15. cow

    cow Member

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    it says in full sentence all written out : crit me or talk shit whatever is clever..i dont post really but boredom causes me to....

    and graffiti have no rules... lol jk... hmm how would u improve both my char. and some letters?
     
  16. lord patrick

    lord patrick Senior Member

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    ai90.photobucket.com_albums_k276_kmurray_2006_boris005.jpg


    diggin some of those throws radawg.
    your simples coming along. jus work on your bars
     
  17. Aktag

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    Cocacola: That 1st piece is cool :)
    suparjafar: Like others said, your progressing. I like ur R
    Patchy: I think you should try simpler....straight letter, imo.
    Squared: Nice piece, but i think that i've seen same letter all the time from you...dunno

    My latest piece:
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  18. lord_plankton

    lord_plankton Elite Member

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    overall not too bad, pay more attention to proportions, your R is way too squeezed compared to the others, the o is alright , try to place the extension somwhere else...L and N go good together but your i is perfectly out of place, so strange, bottom n top extension, how its leaning forward to the L i guess you get the idea....oh and id try to make a fat first outline n then a second, you have three outlines, i mean it doesnt look bad but try switch it up n see what it looks like...
     
  19. Aktag

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  20. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    boris thats so sick. rolin i like everyhing but that r