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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. sinkilla1

    sinkilla1 Elite Member

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    a shit load lol everyone at my school writes theres just some people who are actually good and im not even one of the good ones
     
  2. BlacktodaFuture

    BlacktodaFuture Elite Member

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  3. "Sin"

    "Sin" Senior Member

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    damn your hella lucky. i use to live in hawaii and everyone use to write but when i moved here NO ONE writes lol so it hella sucks dick
     
  4. sinkilla1

    sinkilla1 Elite Member

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    Lol where u from now I r delawhere and it's kinda cool there's slot of writers but there's just a lot of toy ass posers not saying I'm not toy but I'm not a poser
     
  5. Slittt6

    Slittt6 Banned

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    ^^^^^^^^^^^
    Thats Whats up!!!
     
  6. "Sin"

    "Sin" Senior Member

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    yeah yeah, im in washington now. and yeah the people that do say they write hella suck worse than me haha
     
  7. BlacktodaFuture

    BlacktodaFuture Elite Member

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    cut the chit chat. take it to PMs.

    crits?

    crits: Arson, i like it, top of the R is alittle wird.
    Isor: is that a throw or a simple?
     
  8. "Sin"

    "Sin" Senior Member

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    thats just one of my simps. cause my R in my throwie is garbage. lol
     
  9. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    I think it could be a good throw actually. If it's a throw, make it stay like that and you don't need skinnier bars.

    Blacktodafuture - I really like your style, but not your simp so much. I don't know what I don't like, I'm just not really feeling it. The Hyte one looks clean though
     
  10. Church

    Church Senior Member

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    sin the "S" is too big. Nice tag though. Also nice simple style you have going there.

    Here is an update on that one I posted awhile back. I haven't been working on it as much since I've been real busy.

    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00059.jpg
    Idea outline (5-10mins)
    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00060.jpg
    Style file(5mins)
    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00049.jpg
    Outline (3mins or less)
    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00055.jpg
    began knocking it out now, I think there is where I left it off with you guys.
    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00056.jpg
    Still more to be done. I worked on it for like an hour or something around there.
    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00057.jpg
    Whole word is done, but now I gotta block in the tomb and other shit.
    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00061.jpg
    Perspective and loose outlining
    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00068.jpg
    This is pretty much where I am right now with it. I gotta do detail work on the trees, get the roots wrapping around everything just right, detail on the stone, lighting, shading, and then colorize it. I have been working on this off and on so I'm in no rush.

    The picture below was just a quick 1 1/2 hour sketch I did.
    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00074.jpg
    I did do an idea outline, but I don't have a pic of it. I did NOT do a style file and it sorta shows I think.
    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00075.jpg
    Began shading it in
    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/DSC00081.jpg
    Pretty much done. I could clean it up more and take a better pic. It didn't really turn out how I wanted since I freestyled the style and I did not have the actual idea outline handy when I did it. W/e though.
    [Broken External Image]:http://i565.photobucket.com/albums/ss94/freznoimpcbch/outline.jpg
    When I put an outline over it I can see my mistakes easier. The S is weak, R breaks up the flow, and the A could have been better.

    Any other crits for either of these sketches?

    crit me up bitches
     
    Last edited: Jan 15, 2010
  11. graff4ever

    graff4ever Senior Member

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  12. RanO

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  13. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    not you again.....stop with the akward slim lookin shit and DO SIMPLES
     
  14. "Sin"

    "Sin" Senior Member

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    rano you have a really different style,i dont see much structure at all anywhere... but i like your handstyle!
     
  15. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    yeo

    do some stright letters mang
     
  16. Stuck

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  17. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    you changed your5 name agin mang
    nice bars i lik the top one you should finish it
     
  18. Stuck

    Stuck Elite Member

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    well ive got some toronto heads helpin me out and their tellin that there was a hier already so i changed....gota listen to da boss *****s
     
  19. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    yeah thats how the game gose b
     
  20. Church

    Church Senior Member

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    The last sketch I posted did take less than 2 hours after I got the idea right, no bullshit. Also you didn't sound like a douche, I asked for crits and you gave me honest criticism so I get better. It was insightful and helpful. I don't start shit with people who don't like my art on the internet unless I'm bored or cruising for a ban. Thanks

    What I call a style file is something I do to decide what the piece is going to look like in general. It will decide if I do 3d, simple 3d drop, nice straight letters, or maybe add a little this and that to each letter.

    Idea outline: To get basic letter structure and flow down

    Style file:decides what the letters themselves will look like. You can see the style file I posted loosely resembles how the finished letters look, it was a quick basic sketch.

    Outline/blocking in: Most important part I think. Nothing is worse than running out of room on a page, or realizing some character or structure you added won't really flow with everything else. This is where blocking out and outlining helps keep things to size.

    Knocking it out: Just doing the damn thing. This can take as long as you want it to, and it is full of annoying steps like coloring, or shading, but the time you spend here will decide how well the piece turns out.

    That is just my general work flow for pieces I planned out in my head, or if I have a vision of what I want to do. The last picture I posted is when I just freestyled parts. I do a bit of freestyling and planning, it just depends.


    stuck Im feeling that, but maybe make the bars wider.....

    Rano nice color schemes. Work on structure now.


    Any other crits on my stuff people?