try again. use bars this time. and dont add those random super skinny bars. and use letters like this VISE
LOL, i remember that shitty toss on that Keg bellied bitch, yeah. on another note, help a ***** out, huh? i know the hole in the Q is to small i fixed that earlier btw. [Broken External Image]:http://i797.photobucket.com/albums/yy253/lolapples/Photo14.jpg
lol man 3 months writing and thats his best! WOW...thats not very good. im sorry. and im in class , i was scrolling , i didnt want to see that gut , nor did anybody else in my class....EWW! but i think the best one he did was on that girl with the gut though HA!
u mean along these lines then ehh?(if so do u take and add in things now?) [Broken External Image]:http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f185/viseversa101/SDC10864.jpg
vise-dont add anything till e get those simples down..try new style with those letter though(overlap them or tilt every letter a different way)make all ur bars the same thickness and lose the bars that are at the ends of all those letters one evil-same thing^ sice-lose that extension that bends up at the end of the bottom leg on the e
View attachment 552333 Slice- decide whether of not to over lap- the S overlaps the I and the I a little the C then absolutely no overlap on the E. Also the 3D is off in many places throughout the piece. One Evil- straight letters for a while Vice- thats an ok straight letter but the S bar is off- try doing that fast like 50 times. Black- the top of the S and E are fresh but id work with the bottom of those letters a little bit.