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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. skeetz

    skeetz Senior Member

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    i agree with shells crits

    shell- youre going towards a style that can look mad dope when its painted, but its hard to tell what it would end up like if you did it just from that sketch. the one obvious thing i see wrong with it is the bottom of the S and how the dark area doesnt match up the outside outline. All i really gotta say is that youre dealing with a steez that has a very fine line between mad wack and mad fresh. I'd have to see more of em to make a final decision on which one yours is.

    exchange for evow. ran out of black so i outlined the rest in red. ignore the straight letter at the bottom and the hadnstyles, Ive been on a long break and just wanna know if the piece in the middle is still up to par, ill fix the rest later.

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  2. skeetz

    skeetz Senior Member

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    woah double post, sry my comp is shit.
     
  3. viseversa101

    viseversa101 Elite Member

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    For this effect? where do i take it to now....crits
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  4. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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  5. Inlyn08

    Inlyn08 Senior Member

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    I look at everything. Cereal boxes.. street signs. Websites ( Porn ) LOL. But, no I mean I try to analyze some of the shit I see. Google man, something will pop up. In reality.. everyone ends up biting in some small way or another. But if you're taking in a style.. and making it your own, you're not really biting. Like a recipe.. ya dig? Something to start with.. then throwing in your own spices, herbs.. etc.

    Sorry if I was vague.
     
  6. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    siko-lose those arrows but it looks good cuz ur addin some style to it now
    vise-keep the simple and do different color fills,outlines,3d,shadow bubbles...keep the lettters like that and add different colors for now
     
  7. viseversa101

    viseversa101 Elite Member

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    Thanx for a crit


    Didnt realize till i uploaded that i dont like how the s is tight at the top n loose on the bottom but more of what u suggest no?


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  8. LIZARD

    LIZARD Senior Member

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    redeyes-i just reliezed one uses a k and the otherone a c...which one u keepin?
     
  9. BlacktodaFuture

    BlacktodaFuture Elite Member

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  10. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    Its what ever i feel like, i write SIKO SICO SIKOH it dont matter.
     
  11. Sesh-it-up

    Sesh-it-up Guest

    safe- not digin the character at alll i like the piece tho
     
  12. hpir

    hpir Senior Member

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  13. Sesh-it-up

    Sesh-it-up Guest

    i some what dig the throw, work on the botton left bar of the K and try to keep each letter one line.
     
  14. smokeitup

    smokeitup Elite Member

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  15. viseversa101

    viseversa101 Elite Member

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  16. smokeitup

    smokeitup Elite Member

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    maybe, what do u think of it?
     
  17. viseversa101

    viseversa101 Elite Member

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    smokeitup-in sum places the outline needs to be fatter, all in all gg tho im just not feeling the tags, i think if uda left it lone...flipped a page...n tagged ur heart out(like i do after a few drawings) ita saved itself. oh n the 3d on the 2nd letter is flat out missing




    not really liking what i did but i think il keep the 1/2 fill skeem goin
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    Prolly my fave idea, 3d it into slime on the bottom ina fresh green
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    go with a pink/purple fill leave the s alone n just blend, fatten some lines n give the letters a shadow...
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    just gona 3d it to a vanishing point in black/silver n call it a day
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    Crits
     
  18. smokeitup

    smokeitup Elite Member

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  19. Meph*

    Meph* Guest

    the first one looks sick as fuck..the only thiong i dont like is the the swigly shit you put next to the first M
     
  20. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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