to be perfectly honest theres nothing you can improve. you need to go way simpler, keyboard letters. youve got the right attitude though
Sorry that it's a bad picture but yeah it does kinda suck. I'm just happy I've advanced this far! Kezu- Keep it simple for a bit. Aspek- That shit's real nice and clean. Looks fresh. Can't find flaws View attachment 567226
Paint the bottom one. Period. Throw a sexy fill in it. Or just do white. Just paint it. Zane- simple letters, drop the extensions, work on your 3d, let it run over the letter under it if your gonna do it on the right side. It's easier just to do it on the left so you can work on letter spacing too, just fyi. UHOH- your o looks like shit. no offense. work on your letter width for right now and keep it consistent, cut the weird ass bubbles coming off your letters out. Your 3d is off on your O. I'd just do simple top and left bars for now, when you get good at those, then work on straightviews (the shit you attempted). For now, just use a simple outline, not the puddle looking thing. Summary for both of you: SIMPLES!
UHOH go simpler looks eh aspek sexy as hell. dont like that PK extention though havent been on here in a minute, shit. some stuff, havent really been writing/practicing lately but whatever View attachment 567241 View attachment 567242
some shit I did for an exchange on our local messageboard... [Broken External Image]:http://www.wvrapscene.com/v2/images/fbfiles/images/photo_18_.jpg
here,im feelin that as usual,but i think it would look better if u didnt have that arrow coming out your e and make it the same as the other one,the arrows dont look bad,i just think it would look a lot better without them average- that outline on the epic looks slopy,and the a on the otherone looks bad roes - the throwy is lookin better.. keep working on the r and s aspek - the one with the red clouds looks dope man ive been slow on the drawing lately,getting really boring..i need to get out and paint.. [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3354.jpg ^ i know i spelled science wrong..the f and t im kinda dissapointed with,and next time i wont make the e so tall
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Gimme some feedback on some of my blackbook shit. It'd be much appreciated. [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/jaredgarcia1/l_2cc0c70d737a4c9386e3b70a7f939e4a.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/jaredgarcia1/0608102141-1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/jaredgarcia1/0609102111.jpg
Gimme some feedback on some of my blackbook shit. It'd be much appreciated. [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/jaredgarcia1/l_2cc0c70d737a4c9386e3b70a7f939e4a.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/jaredgarcia1/0608102141-1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v65/jaredgarcia1/0609102111.jpg
ody - you have to start simple,look up some fonts and make it as clean as possible,try using just penicl so you wont waste anytime coloring. some crits would be nice [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3354.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe45.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe46.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/tofe47.jpg ^ still needs work,ran out of caps...
***** i live in ohio i know he died, dude is from canada, and i don;t spell it the same way either, nor do i bite his style. no disrespect to him i'm in a different country.. and i was writin this name before i ever even found out about bs..