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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
just put a scrap paper under the paper you're drawing on lol np
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weakfingers - like the cracks in it but im not too sure what it says
gatsoi - those highlights are dope and i like the color choices. prob try getting the drop shadow a little more legit
resk - i like the 3d
cyto - killed it. those eyes and that fill are godly
blacktodafuture - that character is dope. it'd be cool to see that head not be attached to a human body tho. to me it looks more like a creature. just imo tho
juicee - ...throw some color in there? haha besides that i really have no clue what to say. looks like you been in the book for a while. the drips on that syloh are ill
Juice - I think those are shit hot mate, like practically every piece.
Rhek - Good, maybe make the middle bar on the E a bit longer to take up some of that space
Weakfingers - I like it, maybe just a little too much detail
Crits on this pls!!!
^ my girls first atempt at graff.
i made this yrsterday
the letters in the last one could use some work.
and thoes shine marks on the ekilla are pretty lame.
Waste- Bring the outline closer to the letters and use alot less bubbles. Try and make the S flow
resk - i like the 3d
Kew1- I reallyyy like the E in the first piece, the fill is nice too.
Juice- I like that style, It reminds me of ESKiMO2
Juicee thats dope bro
Juice- love that stuff, real clean and tight letters
Prea-Wrong thread homie, but that handy is pretty dope
Blacktodafuture- Umm i cant make out some of those letters lol, work on that the fill is clean though
Deser- Nice fillls and letters homie
Weak- Good shit little to busy though
rhek- Your bars are crazy wobbly make em straight and try not to round ever edge. You need to start working n some new styles cuz your not progressing much.
gatsoi, why do you keep posting the exact same letters?
That line across the middle ruined it
Alright finally I get to post a pic not on the bottom of the page. anyways here it is. kinda made some mistakes when inking it, then tried to correct those mistakes but made them worse... eh oh well.
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oh and that's not my tag, I was just trying different shit out.
Your dropshadow sucks man... The best example is the E, but its different on every letter.. just on the E its like 3 different shadows.
Your R is an A with a chunk missing.
The H is just.... there actually not much wrong with the H, its just got no style. On second thought make the middle bar bigga
The K looks like a dude about to karate chop something in half, now thats pretty cool but i doubt everyone will see that like i did. Make the arm of the dude karate chopping way bigger, so it wont look like an arm anymore.
And dont do that shine
Didnt even see the line till you said something about it, wierd...
Every letter looks real good individually.
could maaaaybe overlap the HAD a tad more, feels like the CH is overlapped more. But i'm only saying that as a crit to justify this bump
i wouldnt do that, by doing so hed kill the only little space left between the letters. id rather cut down on the bottom c, id like to see a close to mirroed d c.
you finaly got your 3d down werd juss work on them add ons now
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