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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
Bars on the A on the top one is a tiny bit to narrow I think dude, niiice fill tho,
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I'm not capable of such things so I'm not going to say anything
And safe that second one is pretty cool
this shits phat.
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aight bud heres an opinion
1st piece yer doing what you normally do. overthinking and overworking things, doesnt need most of those extensions or chips and whats the deal with the one under the a off to the left?
also the 3d is off on that one when compared top and bottom. they both have different vanishing points. top of the letters looks like vanishing point is about an inch above the letters themselves because of the pull in on the ends. then the bottom of the same letters looks like the vanishing point was moves half a mile away heh.
2nd piece is alot better in my opinion. aside from me not understanding the tree for an a bud.i like the fill, like the letters, background does my head in a bit cause its kinda busy bit its still cool but that tree does my head in lol
safe, that top ones hard bud aside from the bar in the middle of the a, i dont know whats happening with your s's though seeing as they seem to be evolving into b's on the third one
My first blackbook piece, what ya think?
thanks boomslang, that was grand
in the first piece, actually I didn't go as nuts as i used to. this time I worked with simple straight letters and drew bars for letter structure (that's the part I'm trying to work on the most in my pieces) and THEN AFTER I was done with the letter's basic form, I added a few extensions here and there. I need to get some crits on letter structure. is it working like that? am I on the right track and shit?
and ure right about the 3D, I just noticed it
and regarding the second one. well this is a cedar, it's our national tree, and it's in our flag. I'm Lebanese like the fill on the piece, the flag has 3 horizontal stripes going red, white and red, with the cedar in the middle of the white stripe in the middle.
and the cedar has a triangular shape like the A. so it works. dono how come it's doin yer head in..
anyway. can I please get some more crits from more peeps ?
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i have nothing to say that hasnt already been said except that you have improved shitloads since this disaster below. you probably realise how bad this one was now
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i like the yellow one better ll
yeah no i can definitely see the flaws now that i went all the way back to straight letters, like the extensions that are all over the place and shit. but I still think that it's not AS bad as everyone gave me crap about it being.
although I'd apreciate it if I could get crits on the letter structure of the first flick I posted on this page. coz I'm trying to take a step forward by adding some extensions and shit to the now fine straight letter structure. and I wanna know if im doing it right. and if not, advice never harms
I usually don't piece, but ehh.
I was bored today.
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I also never draw any characters, but boredom just makes me do shit that I usually don't do.
It was also a sketch, so some parts aren't too visible.
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so do u just do handstyles and throws?
The C is good, the V needs work. Make it as thin as the C, and a little further from it.
@Gyse: Thanks, I guess. I've always had problems with my proportions.
I'll try and look out for it more than I already do.
I've never been impressed with my pieces, so I don't do them very often.
Same thing goes with characters.
Throws, and Hands for me.
I have the most fun tagbanging, though.
Flairs, mops, sandpaper joints, etc.
bump for crits
ibuprofen: i like that C, make the V more like it w. skinnier bars and a loosier sense
phat: honestly im feelin your shit man. it kinda reminds me of oldschool, la style. just watch your extensions they look less like extensions and more like bars if you get what i meannn
smoker: you are my favorite, that mozart piece is fire. but Z kinda looked like a C imo.
mase: your shit looks like my old style where i made all my bars really fat and really close together. your m is huge and then the s is really small, make it more proportional.
Bro, im not feeling that safe, since i know someone who writes safe btw. I could post pics if ya want.
they arnt in my area code and im not ever gonna run into them. doesn't matter.
Those characters are so ugly... Sorry, Safe, but they look kind of lame.
safe im feeling the flow on the first sketch ,i just think the e looks kinda like a b
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