stigma-simples Prea-i dunno ur E is just one long bent bar and doesnt match ur p and R. fuckjthefame-really dont know what it ssays but its not my cup of tea surge-i personally dont like your superr loos style, there is no structural support in those letters...they will probably melt away wish i could say this was a freestyle
SIEK- I'd say make the S a little taller to match the rest of the letters, chill with the arrows for right now untill you get some solid letters going and get rid of that little peg by the K --what is that?? Thats a solid 3D though, just work on the shadings and highlighted areas, some of the highlighted areas shouldn't be highlighted. SURGE- I don't know just not liking it- it looks more Powerpuff Girls than graff to me. Especially with those stars...but if thats what you're going for than so be it FuckTheFame- dont know what you're doing Stigma- does that say ROC?!@#RAC-RBC? PREA- keep playing with those bars- fix that 3D though View attachment 586454 my absolute last piece of paper- dont like the B dont think it works well with the other letters I'd rather use a lowercase b but other than that whatcha think? Dirty- don't really know what it says, work on your letters, the use of colors are good though I think thats what kinda holds the piece up-the colors within the letters and the yellows and pink contrast well SOPE - grind those simples for a while before dressing it up with all those fills and extras
surge really digging that piece.. try making the top of our R bigger. might fit in better with the piece
that's hot, the only things I would change are, that bar coming out of the right side of the A, and scooting the E to the right just a bit so it's not being so overlapped by the R.
prea , sorry bud i just dont like that at all, no consistancy , no flow and just randon bits here n there. heres 2 lame ones from this week, gonna try something a lil different this week and see what i come up with View attachment 586525 View attachment 586526
droping i like everything but the extension from the k prea no flow srry dnt like it at all boomslang what is that thing at the then end of the t on the first piece? freestyle of my buddies name DAVID
That says David? I see like REC or something. If that is an R, it's dope. JHIZ - that's a good simp. BoomSlang - Both are cool, but I don't like the letters connected on the second. Been a while but meh, [Broken External Image]:http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/682/dsc6091.jpg
jhiz- thats a solid simple, try to clean up the lines a bit tho fury-clean up the lines and keep the bars equal width
srry pasted the wrong code that one i did post says R.O.C this one is DAVID the 3d has 2 different yllws but it didnt show up in the pic
the extension from the s to balance the one from the w i will end up redoing the 2nd one a few times till i get it how i want it. next time will prolly be without the bottom connector bar. thanks for the comments so far
try some straight letters. it seems like it went bigger as it went, a, b, u. get down the simples, then throw in those curves. idk.