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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
bump crits plzz.
V is hella weak. Im feelin the fill and splats though.
sech - thats not working out man..make them simple like the letter r
stigma - i dont like how each letter has a random extension made just so they can connect,makes it look wierd and unproportioned..the colors are cool
fuck the fame - go simple
surge - that character is pretty wack no offence..paint the pink one,just fix the "r"
slek - not diggin the loop in your s,or any of the letter connections or arrows
prea - did you even try? that letter e is literally behind the r
fury - that looks messy man and that letter z looks horrible ,work on that hand aswell
jiz - good simple,wack name.
boomslang - start doing all your sketches like the 2nd one,those letters looks MUCH much better than the 1st pic..haha i like how the end of the t looks like razor blade, u should have put it on the 1st "t" so it gives a balance and i would have taken it off completely from the bottom
abu - make that "a" bigger
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the top peice is a freestyle thats why the majority of the cracks look wack
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dr0ping - i love your style, When i drew this i was thinking about your style in school lol. what do you use for your colours?
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TOFE everything looks horrible. you havent progressed in a long time
my shit is fresher than yours, dont think so? step up and battle me
quickie during the blunt sesh last night
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Lol @ prea, you got some balls calling anyones work shit bud, have you even looked at half the crap you have posted?
phelts thats pretty cool but i reckin your drop is a little dodgy ae...
bump for crits
coooolllllll nice quickie lol i like how u made tha top of tha E look like a bandaid
S is whack... n is whack... t is whack... forcefield is whack... 3d is whack... bars are whack.... I would say just completely do a new one and don't try anything to crazy, gotta learn to walk before ya run...
yea and dont sketch with a pen...cos thats what it looks like...just do your lines one times
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my black book is getting full so i thought i would post some ish crits
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Chuke- vomiting in such quantities that one could choke.
bottom page bump
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